Published March 14, 2012
There are things I wish to change
There are very few,
but the list could go on
I want to stop...
Thinking of what others have
When it makes me both sad and mad
Its like the harder I try,
the less I achieve
I want to stop...
Living life the way I do
While others live there happy lives
All I seem to do is weep
I want to stop...
Pretending to be somebody else
Nobody understands, nobody can see
The person I am, is not really me
Most of all,
I want to stop...
These weird thoughts in my head
Imagining the world if I was dead
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I know exactly how you feel. I don't know if this is what you're wanting in terms of comentary, but this is amazing.. In a very depressing sort of way. Great work. Awesome styling, amazing wording. Your talent is unmatchable.
It is sort of depressing in the way, but I like it, in the aspect that you want to make yourself a better person.
That is...Depressing.