PhoenixXander

Haha, this made me laugh honestly, but what good parody doesn't? I've read some parodies on here, and other sites written by people that aren't "professional", and they usually suck. ...

Holy heck, first off this is really sad, and that works well. This tone with your style fits together sweetly. Not too many people know how to correctly use this ...

This gave me goose bumps, I don't know why. I really like the meaning I got from the poem, it's really nice, and realistic. I did realize some grammatical stuff! ...

I really like this poem, even though I'm not a believer in any higher power. I love seeing writing that can break the boundaries of questioning God. I think poetry ...

I really love your poem, I love the words and what it is about. The words themselves flow together quite well, they compliant each other. The format, on the other ...

Wow, I loved every line of this. There is nothing about this poem that I do not simply adore. I love how it sounds optimistic and colorful. It was colorful ...

I like what this is about, aw little crabs. :3 I can totally tell this is your first poem though! You have an okay grasp on a subject, but not ...

Ah, a poem about lust, and heartbreak. Those are very good subjects for a poem! "Or mask in pretentious forms." I really like that line, it sounds very nice. The ...

I like how the title is Capitalized, works nice for the poem. I also really like the hidden meaning behind the poem. You used the common comparison of a birds ...

This is very well written, the beginning real drew me in! There seem to be a few grammatical errors. I think it would sound better though, if there was period ...

I really enjoy what this poem is about. The words are very relatable, I can defiantly fill the shoes behind this poem. It was, unfortunately painful to read. A lot ...

I really like how the first two stanzas can mean almost anything. When you talk about the boys in the alleys doing something horrid, my mind didn't know where to ...

I like how simple this is, but it's also complex. It has a nice rhyme that doesn't run down the words. I like how you used "wisps" to describe her ...

This is a really good piece, very well written. The title is really strong, I probably wouldn't be viewing it if the title didn't flow as good as it does. ...

I really like what this is about. Wanting to go off to Never-land and be a lost boy was always a dream of mine as a child. I think you ...