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Re: Innocence
What hooked me right away was the earthly feeling that connects with the senses. Such great imagery and it is carried through till the end with a deep and thoughtful ...
Jul 12, 2013 -
Re: A moment in time
Such a great feeling you get from this poem here. It is a shorter piece but holds no less depth to it. This is a very relatable poem that can ...
Jul 12, 2013 -
Re: The Silence
This feels like a deep meditation on what it is like to be you. This poem's content is so unique and it reminds me of a friend that fits right ...
Jul 12, 2013 -
Re: The Feeling I Felt
The best poetry comes from the heart. One thing you can do is empower your work with some punctuation and structuring things. I see what you tried to do with ...
Jul 12, 2013 -
Re: The Dreamer
Hello! Your rhyme schemes and sequences are done quite well! The imagery is very powerful throughout the whole piece. One of the things that I find most exceptional is the ...
Jul 6, 2013 -
Re: Escape
This is a shorter piece, but shows no less emotion due to that. With all poetry everyone will interpret and feel it in their own way from their personal experience. ...
Jul 6, 2013 -
Re: Apathetic Motives
Hey there! Such a lovely rhyme scheme and it does not take away from the emotion and message being presented. It is so hard for me to write poetry without ...
Jul 6, 2013 -
Re: Minds That Aspire
Hello! The end rhymes were great and used effectively. The only issue I had with the piece was the structure. I read it twice and found myself trying to pull ...
Jul 6, 2013 -
Re: The Lingering of Lust
Hello! The use of imagery in this piece is fantastic! The use of different sense works well too. One major thing that caught my eye was the use of color ...
Jul 6, 2013 -
Re: The Politics of Romance
Here's Philosopha's review for you :) Excellent poem. Not only do you have a fluent rhyme scheme, but the rhymes are clever and hold the poem together neatly. I truly ...
Apr 3, 2013 -
Re: Center of circle of life.
Here's Philosopha's review for you! :) This poem caught my eye due to it capturing an important aspect of life. I love how you contrasted certain things people do when ...
Apr 2, 2013 -
Re: Life
Here's Philosopha's review for you :) This poem brings deep thought. I especially liked how you ended with a question which seemed to have had me trying to look deeper ...
Apr 1, 2013 -
Re: Silence
Here's Philosopha's review for you ;) This reminds me of a scenario where the person of subject had gone on a mission where in the eyes of his people he ...
Apr 1, 2013
