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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My Heart's Four Seasons

    Hello WinnyWriter, I'm not sure whether or not you were being facetious with the last part - "copyright 2020" or serious, but honestly this is a poem worth a copyright ...

    Feb 5, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: i used to be human

    Hello DemonGoddess, Here to review your piece entitled 'i used to be human' - with that generic use of no capitalisation that seems to be a recurring theme on YWS ...

    Dec 1, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: 1.

    Hello Koitsubaki, Here to review your short story entitled '1.' Ok so the theme is about 'balls' then............................................... random? "You realized it that one fateful intramura

    Dec 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: The Lady Stone

    Welcome to YWS! Curious to know how you found it... I'm here today to review your poem entitled 'The Lady Stone' I wanted to know if the use of enjambment ...

    Dec 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: On The Other Side of The Page

    Welcome to YWS! Hello BookishBrook, here today to review your piece entitled 'On The Other Side of The Page' Let's begin... First of all, I think it's an obvious observation ...

    Nov 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fanfiction Re: Senses of The Gotham Library

    Hello Elinor, Proud to present the very first review to 'review day', in which I'm giving feedback on your piece entitled 'Sense of The Gotham Library' I really love the ...

    Nov 26, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Tied Down, In Tongues, In Hearts

    Hello, I don't want to flower up the intro so i'll just say that the title really stands out to me, which is why I clicked on it in the ...

    Nov 24, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: MY BABY GIRL

    Hello! On behalf of everyone here, we wish you a warm welcome to hopefully a successful career in the writing/reviewing hobby. I'm here to review your piece entitled 'MY BABY ...

    Nov 24, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Satire Re: IF

    Pretty deep poem. Doesn't need of an introduction for a short review of sorts. I don't feel like i'm the best to share my opinion on this especially because it ...

    Nov 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Sonder

    Hello woahhitherepal, Ok so I've already reviewed a piece earlier on and now I understand that this is a common thing that you do with definitions or unfamiliar words, although ...

    Nov 23, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Silent Talk

    Hello Flumadiddle, Here to review your piece entitled 'Silent Talk' Hope you're doing well btw! LOVERS I can't really criticise you on much because of the length of the poem, ...

    Nov 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: mauerbauertraurigkeit

    Hello woahhitherepal, Here today to review your piece entitled 'Mauerbauertraurigkeit' By defining this on google I found the exact same description that you gave, so at least it's not a ...

    Nov 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Milk and Cookies

    Hello TheBlueCat, Here today to give a quick review for your piece entitled 'Milk & Cookies' I'd first like to say that I like these upbeat poems that appear to ...

    Nov 15, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Bonjour Le Monde

    Bonjour Thisislegacy, Je suis ici aujourd'hui pour revoir votre pièce intitulée 'Bonjour Le Monde' Je veux juste dire que mon français n'est pas si bon que ça, je ne fais ...

    Nov 14, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Bloody Hug

    Hello Aleta, Here to review your piece entitled 'Bloody Hug' for review day! I want to start off my saying that the title really stood out to me and is ...

    Oct 29, 2017


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— Antoine de Saint-Exupéry, The Little Prince