Paracosm

Telling your story through dialog alone was a unique idea. Even without you telling us how they feel, you do a great job showing the emotions through what they say. ...

Hey Star! I really enjoyed your poem. I'm not great at reviewing poetry, but I'll do my best to give you a constructive review. Your poem was well written, it ...

Hey Zeph! I'm going to give you a quick review based on the five conventions of writing. Structure, organization, word choice, idea, and voice. You have a really great story, ...

Hey Lady! I tried to write you a review a second ago, but something weird happened. Here goes round two! Your review is going to be based on the five ...

This review is probably going to end up being a long compliment. As usual, I will give you a review based on the five conventions, structure, organization, word choice, voice, ...

Hey Megsug! I'm going to do a quick review based on the five components of writing, structure, organization, word choice, voice, and idea. I hope my review proves helpful, but ...

Hey Lily! I'm going to give you a review based on the five conventions of writing. Structure, organization, word choice, voice, and idea. Since this is a poem, I will ...

Hey Sunshine! I'm going to write you up a quick review. Quick note, I'm so dumb. I thought that your title was a name, and I kept reading it Oh ...

Hey Carlos! Just wanted to say I read the first draft of this story you posted awhile back, and I'd like to say this is a very interesting premise. I'm ...

[color=#4000BF]*** Throws confetti! ***[ /color] Woohoo! Fiftieth review! Okay, now that that's out, for this review I'm going to focus on the five conventions of good writing. What are those ...

Hey there! I'll do my best to give you a good review. I don't write much poetry, and I'm not so great at reviewing it, but I'll give it my ...

Hey Butterfly! I'm gonna write a quick review of your work. As is common for my meager reviews, I'm going to focus on the five conventions of writing, first, the ...

Hey Shuji! Welcome to YWS! I'm going to do my best to give you a good review. I'm not so great at reviewing poetry, but here goes. This review is ...

Hey there! I'm going to try a quick review. I'm not top notch when it comes to reviewing poetry, or even writing it. I'm going to examine the five components ...

Hey Wonder! I'm going to do my best to give you a good review. This is not my strong suit. I'll go through each of the five components of writing, ...