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PancakeandWaffle

  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: ​Is It Worth The Price?

    Hello, Waffle here for a quick review/opinion. I agree with you on many levels; no, it's not worth the price. We are born into a society that is fighting for ...

    Jan 20, 2016
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Health Re: The Second Mind

    This is absolutely brilliant, just fantastic! I really found only one spelling error, but the word itself is up for interpretation. "yenno" instead I think would be "you know" or ...

    Jan 20, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Every Man's Journey.

    This is AMAZING! Best idea I have seen in awhile. Where do I begin? Beautiful literary technique. You know your words, girl! (or guy. eek!) Once again, super idea. I ...

    Jan 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Game of Death

    Hello! Waffle here for a quick review. Side note: After reading this and scrolling to the top, I saw the 16+ warning... I'm not 16 yet! I don't know though ...

    Jan 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Lone

    Hello! Waffle here for a quick review. These are some deep coffee shop thoughts, dude! Lol. "But i am not" capitalize the I. The rhymes are good but I cannot ...

    Jan 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: 14

    Hello! Waffle here for a quick review. Soooooo, overall I give it 7/10. Really good rhythm and I love some good 'ol rhymes :D As the previous reviewer mentioned, the ...

    Jan 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Passé

    Hello! Waffle here for a quick review. You have some mad skillz here dude! This seems like a personal story, but I may very well be wrong. This is remarkable! ...

    Jan 2, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: To Catch Time

    Hey, Pancake and Waffle here to review your poetry! This brings up a lot of questions in my mind. This is a very beautiful work that gets ya thinkin'. What ...

    Nov 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: War Prayer

    Wow, this is awesome! I love how it's descriptive with so few words and not trying to cram all the information on you with no time to really understand or ...

    Nov 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Supernatural, General Re: Dark Denials

    Hello! I think this is a spectacular work of art. I was a bit confused when you used dialogue though. I know it can be done in a poem, I ...

    Nov 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Mythical

    Hello! Waffle here for a quick review. This is truly a beautiful, descriptive piece, but there are just a few things I think could be improved. First off; your title. ...

    Nov 22, 2015
  • Other » Culture, Literature Re: she was curious.

    Hi Waffle, I'm here to review you! So you have a great story going on here, just needs some sprucing up like the reviewers below pointed out. I love the ...

    Nov 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Realistic Re: My 6th Grade Story...

    Hello! Waffle here for a short review. This sure does have its flaws, but for 6th grade it's good. I am around the age of a 6th grader right now, ...

    Nov 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Every Detail

    Hello! Waffle here for a short review. This gives me a new perspective on life and love. I felt so full and happy at the beginning, and towards the middle ...

    Nov 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: This Girl

    Hello! Waffle here for a short review. So, this was what I like to call a "short and sweet" poem. The quaility isn't that great. "I love to see her ...

    Nov 19, 2015


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