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Re: The Border of Light - Prologue (Old)
Here to review! My name is Omniyus! I will be reviewing this piece and all the other parts to this story! I'm going to skip actually grading this story in ...
Feb 2, 2013 -
Re: Yank Chp 2
Here to review once again. I'm still doing it the way I did it on your first chapter. I am seriously getting tired and I don't know how I am ...
Feb 2, 2013 -
Re: Yank
Here to review! My name is Omniyus, and I will be reviewing your work today! I am cutting out some of my regular reviewing style because I am extremely tired, ...
Feb 2, 2013 -
Re: Untitled- Prologue and Chapter 1
Here to review! My name is Omniyus, and I will help you ahcieve your goals of conquering YWS, one story and review at a time! Uh-um. I mean, I will ...
Feb 2, 2013 -
Re: Chapter 1-Emma
Here to review. Oh, I haven't formally introduced myself! My (user)name is Omniyus, and I will be reviewing your work for you. I must warn you, though! What about, you ...
Jan 31, 2013 -
Re: *Needs title :3 but please read* Chapter 1
Here to review! Okay, I will be reviewing in two categories with various unamed categories that are different for each story. Those two categories are Grammar and Storyline. Grammar: I ...
Dec 12, 2012 -
Re: Prologue... I think.
Here to review! This is short, so shall my review! I base my reviews on two categories, each with an unamed amount of subcategories that I won't tell you because ...
Dec 12, 2012 -
Re: Seeds of Love
Here to review!! I don't have much time, so I have to make this short. I will grade you in two categories, with many unamed subcategories, each suited with the ...
Dec 11, 2012 -
Re: WWII Novel.Chap1 (Untitled)
Hello, my name is Omniyus and I'll be reviewing your work today!!!! I do my reviews in two categories: Grammar and storyline. Each of these will have unamed subcategories. This ...
Dec 11, 2012 -
Re: A Toast for a Worse Tomorrow
Okay, here to review! My name is Omniyus, and I will be reviewing your work in two different categories, each with multiple subcategories in each: Grammar and storyline. Grammar: I ...
Dec 8, 2012 -
Re: .
Sorry about that, did not mean to do that. Oh well. *Coughs awkwardly* Well, let's get this show on the road then. Time to review! Now I will judge you ...
Dec 7, 2012 - Re: . Dec 7, 2012
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Re: Alexandra - Chapter 1 Revised
Ok, here to review! Just a fore thought. I stopped reading this story in the middle of it because of several reasons. I have put in the entire story to ...
May 11, 2012 -
Re: Masking Weaknesses
I liked it. It was very good and I know somehow it was from the heart. I don't know if you actually have Tourettes because I have never met you, ...
May 5, 2012 -
Re: The Heart of a Career Part 2 (Unfinished)
F.Y.I this is not all of Chapter 6, I just posted it on here so I could work on it at my house and not at school, I hope nobody ...
May 4, 2012