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Here to review! My name is Omniyus! I will be reviewing this piece and all the other parts to this story! I'm going to skip actually grading this story in ...

Here to review once again. I'm still doing it the way I did it on your first chapter. I am seriously getting tired and I don't know how I am ...

Here to review! My name is Omniyus, and I will be reviewing your work today! I am cutting out some of my regular reviewing style because I am extremely tired, ...

Here to review! My name is Omniyus, and I will help you ahcieve your goals of conquering YWS, one story and review at a time! Uh-um. I mean, I will ...

Here to review. Oh, I haven't formally introduced myself! My (user)name is Omniyus, and I will be reviewing your work for you. I must warn you, though! What about, you ...

Here to review! Okay, I will be reviewing in two categories with various unamed categories that are different for each story. Those two categories are Grammar and Storyline. Grammar: I ...

Here to review! This is short, so shall my review! I base my reviews on two categories, each with an unamed amount of subcategories that I won't tell you because ...

Here to review!! I don't have much time, so I have to make this short. I will grade you in two categories, with many unamed subcategories, each suited with the ...

Hello, my name is Omniyus and I'll be reviewing your work today!!!! I do my reviews in two categories: Grammar and storyline. Each of these will have unamed subcategories. This ...

Okay, here to review! My name is Omniyus, and I will be reviewing your work in two different categories, each with multiple subcategories in each: Grammar and storyline. Grammar: I ...

Sorry about that, did not mean to do that. Oh well. *Coughs awkwardly* Well, let's get this show on the road then. Time to review! Now I will judge you ...

Ok, here to review! Just a fore thought. I stopped reading this story in the middle of it because of several reasons. I have put in the entire story to ...

I liked it. It was very good and I know somehow it was from the heart. I don't know if you actually have Tourettes because I have never met you, ...

F.Y.I this is not all of Chapter 6, I just posted it on here so I could work on it at my house and not at school, I hope nobody ...