Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
People think that I have an innocent mind. My physical features seem to deceive them at the first sight of me. My physique shows that I am a fourteen year old girl, as does my birth certificate. But, my mentality seems to be much older. When I look in the mirror I feel that God, whoever that may be, seemed to have made an error. My face is wrinkle free, showing youth, yet my mind is adequately fatigued, and worn out. My brain is cluttered with ideas, philosophies that my seventy year old grandmother had not come across until her retirement years. I feel that my eyes are the only true conveyor of my intellect to my child-like appearance. The border of my irises are a light navy blue, but adjacent to my pupils, is not quite white, nor a picturesque sky blue. A beautiful indecision, neither one nor the other. A glimpse of my journey through my youthful existence, some people may call it adolescent years, others call it "the tough times". Although, while others do not take me seriously as a writer, or anything else for that matter, it becomes a nightmare. But personally, I prefer to veiw it as my individual damnation from God himself.
Well....I will say this is definitely one of the more unique prologues I've run into on here...I can safely say I've never run into a premise quite like this one before aand it certainly manages to intrigue me here...and do so in a good way.
This seems like it could really lend itself to a very interesting story here, to have someone who appears to be very advanced in thinking but young in age and the way that things are mentioned here I get the feeling this isn't just someone who's really smart and made their way very fast through their studies, but someone that was somehow just gifted this knowledge, I could be wrong, but either way it is an interesting premise here.
Its also especially interesting to see this almost reflection by this person about what they think of themselves and the ability they have. That last line especially about how this person believes this is all some form on individual damnation certainly raises quite a few questions cause you do wonder how bad a situation like this would have to be for someone to come to a conclusion like that.
All in all, I'd say this is a really solid little prologue right here....aaand it seems like a story that I'd certainly continue reading beyond this point.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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