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Hey! I am here to review your work! First, I like the poem. But it needs to be separated, most people don't like big chunks of writing in poems. Your ...

Hey! I am here to review your work!! I like what you did with the tenses of drink. Cool. One bit confuses me, and may confuse others? "The person said ...

Hey! I am here to review your short poem! This poem is awesome, even if you wrote it at 1 am... Well done. As soon as I read the first ...

Hey! I am here to review your poem! First off, great poem! Great meaning, and smooth. Second, you didn't capitalize any of it? All the "i" should be "I". The ...

Hey! I am here to review your awesome poem! I love this poem, well written. Good punctuation and spelling. I'm guessing this good be parents fighting? If it is, then ...

Hey! I am here to review your amazing poem! I love this poem. It has meaning. And it catches peoples eye. You could have stretched it out a little bit, ...

Hey! I am here to review your amazing poem! That was really nice. Hanging out with friends is very fun, and the best time you can have. With friends it ...

Hey! I'm here to review your poem! :D (Sorry if it isn't a good review:P) I like this, a lot. You make it feel real, as if my friend is ...

Hey! I'm gonna be reviewing your piece :) First, I really like this piece, simple, flows very nicely, and isn't lacking in anything. There is one mistake: "My head hurts ...

Hey! I am here to review your poem! Wow. I really enjoyed this. The spelling, the punctuation is perfect! Very well written. I think people will enjoy this, as they ...

Hey! I am here to review your poem. First off, good poem! But there is quite a bit of grammar errors. In line 8, you can see a extra space ...

Hey! I am here to review your story! First off, this is a brilliant story! Well written, understandable, and it puts an image in the readers mind. The story line ...

Hey! I'm gonna be reviewing your wonderful story :D! I saw a lot of mistakes first time I checked this out, but they seem to be fixed.. So I am ...

Hey! I am here for a quick review! Welcome to YWS, your new, just like me! I hope you enjoy just as much as I am so far. First off, ...

Hey! I am here to review your story! I love it so far! Dramatic! There is quite a lot of spellings that need to be fixed, but that's ok. You ...