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  • Poetry » General, General Re: party time

    heyy Smile! Sapphire to the review ^^ I liked the idea of your creative piece :) and I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem, its a piece, anyway but there are ...

    Dec 19, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Think About It

    Heyy Okuro! Its a very intellectual and a philosophical poem and a very good point to ponder upon. The title is also very catchy and I liked it ^^ And ...

    Dec 18, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Drama in my Dream

    Heyy Shubham! Sapphire to the review! First of all I liked the title of you're short story and second of all the theme and the plot. Now the editing part: ...

    Oct 18, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Humor Re: Empty 5

    Heyy Bloodink! Sapphire to the review! Oh my god! First of all I must thank you for posting the 4th part! :) Again I have nothing much to review on ...

    Oct 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Message Of Love

    Heyy Anshira! Sapphire to the review! I should tell you, its a really good poem and ten thousand times better than my poems, seriously. I thoroughly enjoyed reading the poem ...

    Oct 9, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Teen Fiction, General Re: What to Do?

    Heyy Krishnacomia! Sapphire to the review :) So many essay reviews! so let me get to the essay. Okay now there is need of some edition work: ''theirselves is to ...

    Oct 9, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Teenager's Different Colors

    Heyy Chairazell! Sapphire to the review! Another good piece of information on Teens. I liked the heading of the topic. I also liked the way you have started the essay ...

    Oct 7, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Traveling a Stage in Life

    Heyy Splendidsay! Sapphire to the review! Another good topic to review : Teenagers. Its formatted really well and I liked it! "Teenagers are like a ship traveling in the ocean ...

    Oct 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Literature Re: The Artist

    Heyy InfinityandBeyond! Sapphire to the review! Nice username! First of all I liked your piece! its really good and also conveys a really good message to all readers. "God is ...

    Oct 6, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My own mind

    Heyy Writersunleashed! Sapphire to the review! I liked you're poem, you have clearly explained about you're thoughts which has made the poem strong and it was nice to read. The ...

    Oct 6, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Teenage Management

    Heyy Miajaneboo! SapphireFlames to the review! First of all I liked you're topic its quite relevant to most of the people on YWS (like almost everyone on YWS are teenagers). ...

    Oct 6, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Technology, General Re: Technology: Great Contributor

    Heyy there! This is SapphireFlames for the review! seriously what's up with the technology articles? anyway lets review! I liked the question being posed at the starting of the article ...

    Oct 2, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Technology at Its Sweetest Consequence

    Heyy PauuulineJoy! Here is SapphireFlames for the review! Again Technology...? Fine review is more important. I liked the way you have explained the negative effects of technology and also you ...

    Oct 2, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Proving at Present the Countless Use of Technology

    Heyy there! Welcome to YWS!! Here is SapphireFlames to the review! Fourth of the day and Technology again! Anyway, review is more important! I liked the way you have explained ...

    Oct 2, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Took some advice under consideration so leave me your reviews :)

    Heyy Babygiggles! this is SapphireFlames to the review! third review of the day and no technology again! I liked the theme of the short story and you have clearly explained ...

    Oct 2, 2013


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