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Re: nine reasons a writer will never love you (back)
I never encountered poem of this kind before, the numbered listing-style captured my attention as if this was written by an article writer (like me). Firstly, I love this part; ...
Jan 9, 2013 -
Re: swimming.
Beautiful. Your metamorphic ways of crafting those words made the piece lively. That was quite short and I wanted to read more! You made me miss writing! I personally love ...
Dec 20, 2012 -
Re: My cat's brains
Ah.. At first, honestly..I was like..What's this? I couldn't find any sense on the first stanza but as I read along and reached to the ending, "I have separated its ...
Aug 7, 2012 -
Re: My cat's brains
Ah.. At first, honestly..I was like..What's this? I couldn't find any sense on the first stanza but as I read along and reached to the ending, I was like GROSS! ...
Aug 7, 2012 -
Re: Turning My Back
"The night is cold and bitter, but full of life; I can taste the love with every stride. Its arms envelop me; dark, as I descend; The twilight haze pulls ...
Aug 7, 2012 -
Re: The Ironies Of Life
Today today today..Dun dun dun! I never thought that there is someone who writes pieces same as my genre, although, I'm specifically more on the political side. Ah yeah...the ironies ...
Aug 7, 2012 -
Re: Gullible
'lo Kimmi The piece is great. Written from the heart and I can connect to you. The emotions are well-portrayed, what I'm trying to say is---the emotions in this piece ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: False Reflection
Aw UAO :( But Here is the Rant Shop Manager to Review you Awesomeness. ;;; First, it looks more of a ranting But! it will make up a good song. ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: Ace Crawford: New York's Finest
Oh wow, Ace the character, you got the swag! And for the hand that wrote this, WOW. You created a story that is actually too short for me, because I'm ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: Depressed
Oh wow. Two stanzas? Well---- Too short to be too long, cliche, yeah? The piece is written from the heart. And the ending was a boom ; "I am here, ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: the unveiling
"It's a girl!" Love that. I'm not much of a grammar enthusiast since my writing skill is only good for article and content writing, so I am not gonna look ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: Pray
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Mar 28, 2012 -
Re: Romeo and Juliet
It sounds more of like a Taylor Swift song to me. I love how you added the touch of literature there. It is indeed good. This part is what I ...
Jan 17, 2012 -
Re: A Bisexual's Opinion On Life
AJ, ignore them. They aren't worth a second. They just judge, but their judgement doesnt count. What counts is how you look at yourself. You know I love you AJbro, ...
Jan 14, 2012
