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  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: nine reasons a writer will never love you (back)

    I never encountered poem of this kind before, the numbered listing-style captured my attention as if this was written by an article writer (like me). Firstly, I love this part; ...

    Jan 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Culture Re: swimming.

    Beautiful. Your metamorphic ways of crafting those words made the piece lively. That was quite short and I wanted to read more! You made me miss writing! I personally love ...

    Dec 20, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: My cat's brains

    Ah.. At first, honestly..I was like..What's this? I couldn't find any sense on the first stanza but as I read along and reached to the ending, "I have separated its ...

    Aug 7, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: My cat's brains

    Ah.. At first, honestly..I was like..What's this? I couldn't find any sense on the first stanza but as I read along and reached to the ending, I was like GROSS! ...

    Aug 7, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Turning My Back

    "The night is cold and bitter, but full of life; I can taste the love with every stride. Its arms envelop me; dark, as I descend; The twilight haze pulls ...

    Aug 7, 2012
  • Poetry » Satire, Realistic Re: The Ironies Of Life

    Today today today..Dun dun dun! I never thought that there is someone who writes pieces same as my genre, although, I'm specifically more on the political side. Ah yeah...the ironies ...

    Aug 7, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Gullible

    'lo Kimmi The piece is great. Written from the heart and I can connect to you. The emotions are well-portrayed, what I'm trying to say is---the emotions in this piece ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Lyrics » Realistic, General Re: False Reflection

    Aw UAO :( But Here is the Rant Shop Manager to Review you Awesomeness. ;;; First, it looks more of a ranting But! it will make up a good song. ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Ace Crawford: New York's Finest

    Oh wow, Ace the character, you got the swag! And for the hand that wrote this, WOW. You created a story that is actually too short for me, because I'm ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Other » Other, Other Re: Depressed

    Oh wow. Two stanzas? Well---- Too short to be too long, cliche, yeah? The piece is written from the heart. And the ending was a boom ; "I am here, ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: the unveiling

    "It's a girl!" Love that. I'm not much of a grammar enthusiast since my writing skill is only good for article and content writing, so I am not gonna look ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other Re: Pray

    :)...

    Mar 28, 2012
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Romeo and Juliet

    It sounds more of like a Taylor Swift song to me. I love how you added the touch of literature there. It is indeed good. This part is what I ...

    Jan 17, 2012
  • Other » General, General Re: A Bisexual's Opinion On Life

    AJ, ignore them. They aren't worth a second. They just judge, but their judgement doesnt count. What counts is how you look at yourself. You know I love you AJbro, ...

    Jan 14, 2012


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