Nyconz421

Very deep and emotional. It is very good. You show real pain but at the same time show some pain that others have probably felt. Keep it up!

So, I've decided. There are people that can write poetry and then there are people that fake poetry. You can write poetry. Besides a few spelling errors this poem is ...

I liked it. It has great potential. It shows that the kid has a great sense of imagination and that he uses it. Ugh, I miss being thirteen.

This is really good. I can relate to it although maybe thats not good. But I don't care. This was really good. Keep it up.

Not sure what the poem is about but the words and lines of it are very good. Only one spelling correction I see that should be made. I'd give it ...

Want me to be truly honest? This was really good. The only problem that I would have in it are some few errors that are really not that big of ...

I think you are all right. I was just having a really bad evening so I wrote what came to me...I will edit it. Sorry it's so selfabsorbed

Very nice. Is this poem true? I agree with what Riedawriter said. That spot made me double check what I was reading but the poem its self is well written, ...

Pop as in....hmm, I mean it makes work and it blends in with the poem. Its a good thing dont worry.

Wow, this is kinda depressing but it's good. It caught my attention. I liked the last 2 stanzas especially. It fits the rest and makes it really...I dont know, POP ...

I'm sooooo confused! Apparently i need to read Ch first!

Would it be polite just to say I liked it? I feel as though I'm saying that a lot though. I think that this is one of the better poems ...

I liked the poem. I dont normally read poems nor write them but I thought this one was really good. It got me thinking and I like when I can ...

When does the next one come out? Is he on a one book per year contract or something?

This is a really good poem. Just wanted to let ya kno that.