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Re: Re-peat
Hi, aqua here to review! Haha, wow I love the descriptions. I've always loved visual imagery and this just gives me shivers. :D I also love that you didn't try ...
Sep 30, 2013 -
Re: To Live
Aqua here to give a short review! There's been a lack of inspirational poems around in my opinion! I'm so glad to see one pop up right in front of ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Constellation of thoughts
Wah. Gosh, I loved this. I've always loved beautiful words and imagery and descriptions. This is just so haunting. It gives me shivers down the back of my spine reading ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Just Like The World
Hi, aqua here to give a short insightful review! We really need to write more things like this. It feels like I haven't read something so honest in a long ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Horae Clepsydra
I have nothing to say about this. OuO As always, beautiful imagery and choice of words. Almost everything in this poem is written like a pro! :P I agree with ...
Mar 2, 2013 -
Re: Mt.Everest
Hiya, Skye! :P Your good friend Aqua here! I know when I heard this before, I didn't pay attention cause of the whole "Maths" thing, but now, since I got ...
Feb 28, 2013 -
Re: On the Precipice of Life
Heya! I have nothing to say about this poem other than the fact that it is written very well, and gave us the message you meant to express! Props to ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: The Lady
Wow, this is just two really big run-on sentences. This, in my opinion, should be a poem, formatted exactly how Wind wrote it below. A woman is out there, lying ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: Short Script
Aqua here! XD Honestly, I loved reading this. I wished I could read more. The part where they think he's a Princess but then everyone gets confused and then the ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: Rage
Kopaka! Dont worry! XD I won't tear this apart! I liked this. It was short but gave us a really deep insight into the guy's mind. That's only something you ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: PINK DISTRICT - Intro
Ok, this is WAY too long for an intro. If you cut it, I'd love to review it then. Is it is though, I read the first two paragraphs and ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: Perfect Time
Wowe! You don't see poems like these much! XD I can't review indepth, but you have some awesome imagery going for you in this poem. Lots of similes and metaphors ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: Freshly Fallen (random clip)
Well, I don't quite understand anything in this. Is it about a fallen angel who tries to teach a human to become an angel? O.o I hope so. I liked ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: De Frog Wizard
LOL, I loved this! Absolutely kiddie-like! I know your brother must have loved this. XD I loved the use of De all the time, it added repetition as well as ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: The Beginning
Um... this is just a simple retelling in poetic- structure. I don't see much significance in what you wrote, except that it is a tale from the bible. Well, for ...
Feb 24, 2013
