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NightWolf

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: A Tragic Tale: Chapter 2 - Charms

    Hello NightWolf here to review for you today. I personally really like this chapter. Your description is amazing, especially at the start, and your dialogue is so believable. When I ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: To Fall or Rise: Chapter 4

    Hello NightWolf here to review for you today. This chapter is brilliant! The characters are believable, the setting is authentic. As far as I can see, there is only one ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Hallelujah!

    Hello NightWolf here to review your poem. I really like this poem, it portrays to me a clear message of the sacrifices God made for us. It's an important topic, ...

    Oct 26, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Storm

    Hello NightWolf here to review your poem. It's a nice little poem I particularly like the "one Mississippi" part, it really shows innocence, something you are taught at school. You ...

    Oct 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Though I...

    Hello, NightWolf here to review for you today. I really like this poem, it holds so much raw emotion and power it's hard not to. Flow From what I can ...

    Oct 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Each Day

    What a lovely little haiku! I am no good at them, so well done for writing this one. Personally, I love how short poems can hold so much meaning, and ...

    Oct 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Devil In My Dreams

    Hello, I'm here to review for you. I personally really like this poem, it's definitely one of my favourites on here. Flow When I read this aloud, it flows good, ...

    Oct 26, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: A story from fallen leaves

    This poem is beautiful. No more said. To me, it perfectly captures the essence of autumn, and that makes me stop and re-read over and over again. Flow: The flow ...

    Oct 26, 2013
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: People Gallery

    Hi there, Squire Wolf here to review. I don't normally review lyrics, so I apologise if I don't help you as much as you like. This song flows, and when ...

    Oct 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Horror stories

    Hello, Squire Wolf here to review for you. These stories both have a chilly quality to them, and I have goosebumps right now. My favourite was probably the second, it ...

    Oct 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Cuando tengas alas

    What a beautiful poem! I will ignore your grammar because you asked to, so instead I will focus on vocabulary, meaning and the flow ect. First off: Vocabulary Your word ...

    Oct 24, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Days of Gold Gone By: Ep.Four

    Hello, Blackwood! NightWolf here to review. I love your beginning. Almost immediately, I am intrigued by why Akira sees the train as this. You have given the reader a clue ...

    Oct 21, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: Sin

    Hello, NightWolf here to review for you on this fine day. As Sparkle said, this is a very dark topic, but you have thought it out well and the finished ...

    Aug 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Tiger

    This poem is so beautiful. I love nature and animals so I was automatically drew in by the title. Short, simple and sweet, perfect! I must say, I am very ...

    Aug 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Cinquain Poem; Death

    I have never seen this type of poem before,but I must say it is very intruiging. Not much of a review can be said here, can there? Your vocabulary choice ...

    Aug 25, 2013


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