NightOwl

Hello! I seriously can't find anything to correct in this. It was pretty cool to read. The description was pretty good on basically every sentence you wrote. The last few ...

Hello! ^.^ This piece was pretty sad. You can really feel the character's mourning for her brother, how she wishes she can can just go back and change what happend. ...

Hello! I can't really find anything to correct grammatically here, so great job on that. The whole idea of this poem seems really interesting to me. We're all obvious writers/readers ...

Hello! Not really sure if this should count as a review or not, because I really only have praise, haha. This was very creative and charming. I loved it! I'm ...

Hello! As I cat owner myself, I can totally relate to this. You really got the idea of cats down, haha! Even if they can be little devils sometimes, they're ...

Hello! This poem surprised me a bit (in the good way, of course!). In the beginning, it starts with the narrator begging his lover to see him, to run away ...

Hello! Wow! Absolutely amazing start! It was mysterious and had a nice rhythm to it, and I'm still trying to figure out who 'he' is. I mean, at first I ...

Hello! I just wanted to say first off that I absolutely loved this! I see so many poems about depression and anxiety, that I found this poem filled with so ...

Wow. I love this! I feel as if we can all connect to this, making it a very relatable poem. It gives me sort of a warm poem, really xD ...

Interesting concept! :) I love these kinds of stories. Some parts were also kinda confusing, though. "I made an effort to look stable.." is slightly odd wording that puzzled me ...

Hello! ^.^ I think you did a really good job of describing his emotions, and I really liked the way you compared it to the 'calm before a storm'. The ...

Wow! I really like this! :D The only thing that I noticed was that in the first paragraph, it says that the man 'fled' the house in past tense instead ...

Sounds intriguing! Some tips/corrections that I found: You were pretty good with your grammar, but I did notice in one sentence, you forgot to capitalize 'Society' in 'Secret Society'. You ...

Now, let me start off with saying that this was very imaginative and interesting to read. You made sure to hold my attention, and I found that it was fun ...

Hello! Incidently, I hate rap, but this one really made me chuckle! I thought this was hilarious (and probably the only rap I'll ever like) and very enjoyable to read. ...