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This is unbelievably beautiful, how you brought the months of the years to life. I'm going to point out all the things I loved. I like to tell the writer ...

This is so powerful, and really let me get to know you throughout what you said in this piece. It shows the sadness, the good and the bad of being ...

"Washing my feet in a poison I can't stand" was an awesome line. I like how you compare his goodbyes and hellos to waves. I do agree with the reviewer ...

I really love the story telling Of a persons live throughout their teenage years. It really shows how things are/were for most of us. It gives a very sad vibe, ...

This is so beautiful and it was an amazing tradition from a light feeling to a dark feeling. It gives a sense of power , yet weakness. "I have always ...

You created such a different feeling with this poem that is is unbelievable. It is so beautiful and unique. You created the sense of mystery and wonder between the girl ...

I'm obsessed with imagery so this blew my mind. "Ribbons of red sin", freaking genius!!! I love the darkness and passion you put into this and how carefully you structured ...

Woah, a poem hasn't brought out emotion in me like this in a long time. So beautiful. I loved the detail and how you really let the reader in on ...

Such awesome imagery!!! Winter is definitely my favorite season to write about. "The ice shimmers in the suns departing wake" creates such a beautiful image in my eyes. I also ...

Hey! I love how relatable this poem can be to all writers. I'm at a point in my life where I haven't been writing either and it's so hard to ...

I am in love with the power of this poem. I am obsessed with freedom, my own and all others. I hate not being in control of my life, my ...

Hey, this poem hits me in a weak spot, especially today, because I'm sick of hearing sorry from the one who I love at the moment. But anyways, I love ...

Hey, NewYork here for a review. There are some grammatical errors in here like *eve if I hang" and "never come around" and "I do not why". Otherwise, I love ...

Hey, NewYork here for a review. I think that this poem speaks to females a lot because it is true, what we wear is our weapon. How our confidence is ...

Hey, NewYork here for a review(: I love the personification of the alcohol bottle, making it seem like a person. This poem can be very relatable to a variety of ...