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I enjoyed this piece a lot. The flow was great, and so relate able and pretty vivid. The end was perfect, It left a mystery which is what i love ...

Well first i'll start by saying you do have potential. But what you did here, it seems like you forced a lot of big words and threw them together just ...

Very enjoyable, love how it rhymes so well, I would like to hear this in song!! "I am so alone, I am so numb The world is a stick and ...

I loved it, i can't imagine this in song at all, but it was so vivid and everyone can relate to fighting they're demons. So well put and i was ...

I liked this a lot, I don't know about the flow. But I definitely admire that you stand up for yourself. I would really like to hear this in song, ...

I liked this piece a lot, Id love to hear it. So much emotion and flowed so perfect.. A couple parts didn't rhyme but that's fine because I'm sure it ...

I simply loved this! It was like you were telling me a story and i was drawn in. I felt like it was me talking to the man and seeing ...

Okay I'll start by agreeing with all of the other comments. It does sound a little bit cocky, and this piece isn't very complex. Although i did enjoy it because ...

I loved this one. Definitely would enjoy to hear this in song. So many metaphors but understood completely what it was about. Far beyond erupting volcanoes, across seas of wrath ...

Wow, very deep. But i will admit i had to read over a few times because i got a little bored with it in the beginning but in the middle ...

This is very interesting. I liked this a lot because its very relate able and vivid. The beginning and end was personally my favorite. "Maybe I've had a little too ...

I do like this but i think it could a little bit longer. I like how i could actually imagine the girl in my mind by reading but I will ...

Very vivid, I like this a lot. I could imagine everything. I love how you made it rhyme too. I'd be hoping to keep on sleeping, for when I do ...

Very vivid, I like this alot.