Nargles

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This is really good! I liked the over all theme of the poem and I think you pulled it of really well. There are just a few things that I ...

Hey just wanted to say that i look forward on your revised version of the poem, i am sure it will be good!!!!

Hey so I just want to say a few quick words on this. First it seems really rushed like you went through the dictionary and just picked out random words ...

Hey this is an interesting poem, it has a very interesting structure which i like. There are a few things that i would like to point out. I would suggest ...

Hey this is nargles here to review your chapter. Okay so it is okay but it needs soem work and some very drastic editing. First up i have read your ...

Oh good you changed it to a better structure. It is just i tried to read it before but i couldn't because i found it to hard to follow. I ...

Hey, Nargles here and I will review your poem. Okay, so it was good and i liked it overall but there are severalthings i which i think you should consider ...

hey Nargles here to review your work, Okay firstly it is good but there are few things that need to be changed. 1. you change from saying 'he' when talking ...

Thanks heaps, don't worry about reviewing it now it doesn't matter. But i am glad you can relate to it. I think that most people and especially teenagers can relate ...

thanks for the review it was very helpful!!!

Haaa nice story!!! nah never mind about it but u could edit it when u do another one!

This is so bloody good!!!!! but one word of advice maybe take out the 'quote by me' thing!!!!!! people might not like it and it sort of throws of the ...

Hey, It isn't bad but i did notice a few mistakes which I will point out to you. "wincing at the branches that hit my face and arms." I would ...

right, i see that is why i don't understand, I'm not from America. It is good though and i understand what you wanted to say now! I guess in a ...