a visit to yesterday

by Keshavthakuri

Published March 10, 2012

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I wanna go back to the 80's ,
Where Mohawks was cool , and rock n roll was famous .
Where a denim jeans and a black t-shirt ,
worn on the first date concert ,
turned out cool without any bling blings .

Wood stock and guns and rosses concerts ,
That's where I wanna hang out .
alcohol like fashion ,
smoked into the era of headbanging.
Long hair and the chicks in tights ,
Oh ! Those colorful black and whites.

Radio turned in it highest volume ,
Lyrics made of freedom .
Assignations without allegations,
Development without a cause ,
Everything with it's coarse.
Without a worry ,
Missed by a generation
Captured in  time

 Bad boys in motorcycles ,
Leather jackets and big boots .
Bandanas worn high ,
trusts inked in tattoo ,
moments boosted by music .
Thoughts stuck in the simpler things ,
Larger then life ideas ,
Born out of passion .

Sky full of stars .
Seconds filled with ,stretches of time more deeper then day and night .
Roads with stories,
Bigger then the highways .
Men made in gyms ,
Women grown into independence .
Inventions filled with changes .

letters written in a paper
A death note or a love confession ,
Treasured over years into a memory, turned gold .
Movies born of love ,
actors made of drama .
 My digital toys can rest here ,
I wanna go there like it never existed .
A trade with time ,
An agreement with the present
 My choice built of expectation ,
A yesterday better then tomorrow.
A journey into the 80's............
Comments & reviews · 2
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Shakespeare Review
Shakespeare wrote a review Review · Mar 27, 2012

I like the structure and rhythm of the poem. Great job, keep writing!

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Nargles commented Comment · Mar 10, 2012

Oh good you changed it to a better structure. It is just i tried to read it before but i couldn't because i found it to hard to follow. I enjoyed it a lot though. Showed a lot about your love for the 80's.
anyway keep it up!!!!!



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