Nargles

Hey, I really liked this poem, you have some beautiful imagery in it, so well done. It was very easy to read yet at the same time has a lot ...

Hi, Well I rather liked this poem, it was nice, sweet and brought a smile to my face, so job well done. So you mentioned that this was your first ...

Hey, Nargles here to have a crack at reviewing this for you. I rather enjoyed this, though I don't play chess and have very little understanding of it so I ...

Wassupppp! Hi, I'm Nargles and I am here to give a completely professional and helpful review. I like this poem, it was intriguing. The title alone makes it seem interesting, ...

Wow! I found this a very intriguing read, while as Veeran said, you do present a stereotype, it is done in such a wonderful and thoughtful manner that I don't ...

Hi Mercy, So first of the bat, you have a piece which has potential, while it's not magnificent there is something to work with. So I will do my best ...

Hey, So the other reviewers have talked about how it is cliche and all that crap, yes it is, yes you can change it to make it better and well ...

Hi, Ok, so most of the technical, grammatical stuff has been talked about, so I won't bore you with that. I think you have great potential and talent, that if ...

Heya, This is a great letter/story whatever you are calling it, good job. I like the emotion you do have in here, but I think you could possibly add more, ...

Heya! I like this piece, it is good and you display your emotions clearly. You tell the story really well as well, I felt like I have gone through what ...

Howdy! Ok, firstly this is a very interesting piece, I'm not sure what to make of it just yet. It is good and you have some wonderful imagery in it, ...

Hey, This is a good poem but it needs a bit of work. I'm going to get a bit harsh so I'm sorry. Ok so you have a nice idea ...

Wow! I really like this, it's sad and full of emotion. Good job! The only thing which I think can be worked on is there are times when it doesn't ...

Hey, I really trylu loved this, it was captivating, heartfelt and just really good. So firstly I loved how you broke it up, the structure was great. Secondly I loved ...

Wow! This is intense and amazing. I didn't enjoy reading it but I do love it. There is so much emotion behind it. There are things which do need to ...