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Re: One sleep too many (collaboration; Karzkin, PenguinAttack, Cadi)
Hi, Firstly good job all of you. You create this bizarre story very well, even if I haven't quite figured out all of it yet :) I feel though that ...
Jul 9, 2012 -
Re: Mask-Free
Hey, Nargles to give you a review. Firstly I laugh the meaning and message behind it. I also love the setting in which you decided to address this message. You ...
Jul 9, 2012 -
Re: Where I must go
Hey, Ok this isn't a bad poem and in fact there were bits that I rather enjoyed. I do feel as if it is a bit cliché and while there ...
Jul 8, 2012 -
Re: woman
Hi, Ok it was a good poem and there were bits that I enjoyed! Even though there's a great sense of symbolism in it, it lacks a bit. I feel ...
Jul 4, 2012 -
Re: Always More
Hi, just here to review your work. Okay it was a nice poem and there were parts that I really enjoyed. There were also parts I didn't but I will ...
Jul 4, 2012 -
Re: Listen.
This is a very good and well written poem. It really moved me in some way. It just captures how people feel about taking things slow. Your use of words ...
Jun 25, 2012 -
Re: Fireflies
This is a very pretty poem and well written. You create a nice picture in my head of fireflies and you do it with such creativity. 1) It goes on ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: Gullible
Ok not a bad piece but it is lacking in well something. It is filled with emotion and I connect to you in some way. The first stanza for me ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: Circle
Hmmm, an interesting poem in all accounts. To me it seemed like an out look on life and nature but feel free to correct me if I'm wrong. The layout ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: Lifeless
Oh wow! this is really intense. I enjoyed it and how it is really dark yet it has a light hearted feel to it in how you wrote it. I ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: Ghost Town.
Well this poem is very emotional! It has great rhyme and does't seem forced. The imagery is great but the actual subject I am not sure about. Who is the ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: False Reflection
WOW! this is good and really meaningful! I enjoyed it heaps and heaps! I don't review many songs so I don't know what to look for but from what I ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: Whispers of the moon
Ok firstly good job! It is a well written poem with lots of great imagery and description in it! But it is lacking in something and for me it is ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: An Ode to GRANDPA !!
This is a really sweet and heart felt poem. It really shows how much you loved him. your flow is beautiful and seems to some naturally. The one thing that ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: lien
This poem is great! It has a great sort of flow and beauty and mystery to it! You have great imagery and description in it and that really helps bring ...
Jun 24, 2012
