Nargles

Hey there, Ok this is an interesting poem and rather powerful. It didn't stick with me though, I felt as if the way you went about addressing the message and ...

This was brilliant. I don't review or read that many lyrics but I guess it is just poetry but with a beat. Anyway I thought that this was great, the ...

Hi I really enjoyed this poem, it was very interesting and full of emotion. It was really sad as well, (I assume you are talking about suicide). Anyway it really ...

Hey, this is a sweet poem and rather well written. It's a wonderful poem about loss and confusion I guess. This is just what I got from it. I found ...

ok you have a very interesting poem here, as I was reading it I was wondering where it was heading and the ending surprised me a bit. It is a ...

Hey, This is a very good poem filled with lots of imagery and description, there are quite a few typos so if you go back through and re-read it you ...

Hey, this is really sweet and captivating, just work on structure a bit and all. But it really doesn't matter about it that much as the poem is still wonderful. ...

Hey, this is really good. Very enjoyable, a few bits that I will pick out for you, (seeing that I'm suppose to be reviewing you). Ok so firstly, the flow ...

Hey, This is good and beautiful and the message couldn't be more clearer. The thing is though I found it hard to get through it, at first thinking it would ...

HEHE, This was rather enjoyable, very light hearted and funny. It's a bit ironic that I'm reading this on the....... Internet but it was good. I've never reviewed a play ...

Hey, I'm a bit in two minds about this poem. On one hand it is very good but on the other I feel as if it doesn't quite come together ...

Hi. Ok first things first you have to decide on your tense. For example one minute you are saying We both laugh and I get up to greet him. Then ...

Hey there just here to give you a quick review. Okay this is a really good poem. You captured the time period really well and I can really see the ...

Hi there, I'm Nargles and hopefully I can give a few words of wisdom. Firstly it is a nice little poem and has some really good bits to it. I ...

Hey, you commented on my work so I thought I would repay the favour. Okay so I enjoyed this a lot. It has some beautiful description in it and it ...