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  • Delm (i'm searching for a better title) Chapter 1

    I know this isn't exactly a short story so even if you just read a sample that would be helpful. Any suggestions for a better title would be helpful. Also ...

    8 min read
  • Delm(i'm searching for a better title) Chapters 2,3,4

    Hmm UNCHARACTERISTIC WORLD.The family held on to the last hours of the weekend. The day’s had gone quickly and nobody wanted to go back to the ordinary, boring world where ...

    26 min read
  • Don't take me back to reality

    Simple words just flowing off my tongueWhile we're sitting in the a - pril sunHow did it come back to thisI wonder what we have - missedWe should probably get ...

    1 min read
  • Delm(I'm searching for a better title) Chapter 5

    Hey i pretty much listened to what everyone had to say on the last chapters and then edited this one. Thanks for reading hope you enjoy:)DECISIONS, DECISIONS.Max was back in ...

    5 min read
  • Black Bird

    SORRY ITS KIND OF LONG BLACK BIRDVerse1: His nameis unmentionablenot quite forgettableso i wont mention it to youHis fame is quite regrettablenot unexplainable It cant be helped by what i ...

    3 min read
  • Pen to Paper

    HEY JUST PUT THE CHORDS IN IN CASE ANYONE IS REALLY BORED AND WANTS TO HEAR WHAT IT SOUNDS LIKE, I PLAY IT ON GUITAR. BY THE WAY THE CHORDS ...

    2 min read
  • Delm(searching for a better title) chapter "Generosity"

    Anyone who has read the previous chapters of the story should know that I've skipped through about 60 pages and just posted the chapter that I've most recently posted( before ...

    15 min read
  • Stupid Worries (just wanna fall in love)

    Hey i like this song but i can't help feeling thats its cliche and possibly corny. Give me your thoughts. All these things Who i'm gonna beWhat i'm gonna doWhere ...

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  • A Strike of Light

    Hey this is a Shakespearean sonnet i had to write for school about nature. This is my first sonnet and first bit of poetry in ages so tell me what ...

    1 min read
  • I can't do it, I can't move on

    Hey i originally wrote this as a song but i can't seem to make a melody that fits so i'm wondering what you think of it as a poem. Should ...

    2 min read
  • Harry Potter- What happened after death, chapter 1

    Just so you know this starts after the last chapter of the seventh book and BEFORE the nineteen years later bit. chapter 1:Harry woke up, bruised and battered. He opened ...

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  • Harry Potter- What happened after death, chapter 2

    Harry didn’t read the newspaper that came a week after. He didn’t read any newspapers anymore. He had always had to deal with fame but now he had become some ...

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  • Harry Potter- What happened after death, chapter 3

    “Harry,” Hermione said hushed, waking him up.“Wha-“said Harry, blindly looking around.“Sorry I thought you were awake,” she whispered. “Meet me outside in the hallway,”“Okay,” said

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  • Harry Potter- What happened after death, chapter 4

    Emerald hooted, waking Harry up, for a short time he thought he was back at the Dursley’s with Hedwig. As much as he hated the Dursley’s it was a rather ...

    4 min read
  • Harry Potter- What happened after death, chapter 5

    “Why do they come here?” asked Mrs Figg.“They’ve been here before?” asked Harry.“Oh yes, a whole range of different reporters each has a little look around and then apparates away. ...

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  • Harry Potter- What happened after death, chapter 6

    Harry woke up to a musty smell which made his sinuses feel slightly clogged. He felt uncomfortable having slept in Mrs Figg’s spare bed but he felt he should be ...

    3 min read
  • American Dreams remake

    Okay so i did this story for school. Basically we got told that we had to create a story based on a story by Peter Carey from "collected stories". So ...

    9 min read
  • Oh the beautiful land

    Hi everyone. I thought i'd try some poetry, or more i didn't think and somehow got inspired to write poetry. Anyway i don't really know which catergory it fits into ...

    3 min read
  • Canola field

    Okay Ive tried to fix up some dodgy parts though its been hard. Just to clear it up there is no killer in the canola field. I want this story ...

    8 min read
  • sand castle

    Limited are the capabilities of a personFutile are our attemptsTo be anything more than justHuman. The sand runs through our fingers and Like a child Clumsily we bulldozeOur mighty sky ...

    1 min read
  • too scared to let you go

    Bridge: I don't know what to say yes or no All that i know is i'm too scared to let you go Chorus:And we made every choice together So how ...

    2 min read
  • Blue Pain

    I didn't know what else to call it (i thought "well of pain" was too corny) so i thought of the two things this story is about. Anyway i know ...

    2 min read
  • Garden

    Ok so even though i should be studying right now and even though i have chosen a career in science i can't help the writer inside me from writing!!!!! Ok ...

    2 min read
  • I miss him

    My first romance story ever!! Yay ... Completely written on a whim. I realise that nothing happens and its all just reflection but i'm wondering is it alright? To be ...

    6 min read
  • He trusts me

    This is a bit of a sequel to "I miss him" but you don't have to have read that to understand this. If you have read the first part then ...

    4 min read
  • I want him to care

    Ok so since the last two pieces i've really changed the tense. Hoping it hasn't impaired it I've made some additions and edits since the last post so if anyone ...

    6 min read
  • The little things between us

    Oh my gosh i'm sorry to say i've become a bit of a post-aholic lately *correction = write-aholic. I've really become quite fixated with this series of short stories. Just ...

    7 min read
  • All just a lie?

    I just don’t really understand. I try to add all the bits up together but they keep contradicting each other. The negative’s and positive’s cancel out which equals zero-nothing. I ...

    4 min read
  • Goodbye

    Hey guys This is the concluding piece to the other 5 romance short stories that i have written, once again i emphasise that it should (if i've written it correctly) ...

    5 min read
  • The recovery

    Ok so i posted this because i'm not sure about it. I have two ways of writing songs: 1. I write the lyrics and then can never find a good ...

    2 min read
  • YOU didn't help

    This is just a nightmareThat I don't wanna have againThis has left me frightenedBut I stuck it out to the endThis was just a misunderstandingFrom someone i called a friendThis ...

    2 min read
  • Little red cross

    Come cleanto who you areCome clean To all your scarsWash cleanThe tattoos on your heartWring them out to dryPeg them up with a lieand let it drip out Until there's ...

    2 min read
  • Dreams are empty

    Hi im not a regular poetry person so if i've put this in the wrong genre let me know...She walks inside of meBetween shredded muscle and fractured boneShe waits for ...

    1 min read
  • Understanding, all i wanted

    So i went really unconventional with my structure- is this ok????... Why do you feel the need to tear me upInto pieces so smallLittle parts of me i'll never get ...

    2 min read
  • Forgiveness must be given

    I'm not a poet so any help - especially technical stuff- would be greatly appreciated (although I emphasises ANY help) Oh what I'd give to rewind the clockWith the knowledge ...

    2 min read
  • Translucency

    This one's a bit different... bit unsure about the chorus :/You disrupted my breathing pattern so badlyThat now I breathe in fear like a drugAnd nothing this big ever fades ...

    2 min read
  • Gently

    (So this is about how beautiful it is when someone is really, really nice about breaking your heart- so nice it doesn't even hurt. I wrote this one a while ...

    3 min read
  • It's Okay

    Ok so yeah, this is a true story, so it's probably not written the best anyway... I meant for some parts to be a little funny, but I'm not the ...

    5 min read
  • Connected

    Not finished yet a bit darker than usual... here goes:I still feel connectedto youLike tiny threads hold me backLittle drops turn white paint blackI haven't communicated with youin so longI ...

    1 min read
  • Unless it's you

    Incomplete but here goes... I need a little bit of helpWith trying to deal with myself Looked in the mirror and i don't like what i seeMy hearts crumpled face ...

    2 min read
  • Beginning to End

    I miss you I miss youI miss you I miss youWhen we started off It was just me watching from the cornerYou didn't take one chance of noticeI tried subtle ...

    3 min read
  • Rip (our story up)

    Rip my soul Rip my heart outHit the wallsGet the pain outLike before When i asked whats the worst that could happenLike before When i didn't see the dark i ...

    2 min read
  • Suddenly

    ( Okay i'm not happy with the title- its just too obvious so if you have any ideas let me know. Oh and i just blitzed my year 12 literature ...

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  • Let Me Swim

    Its hard to look aheadWhen there's just nothing thereIts hard to see past wallsWhen they're blindingly bareImagining a worldWithout you thereIs like breathing in waterBecause there isn't any airThe tr

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  • Arms

    Okay so obviously a pretty cliche topic so hoped to make it a little different You've got a heart Beating in your chestKeeping your blood circulatingDon't you ever let it ...

    3 min read
  • The Cold

    In days of cold, fields of snowdie the old, while young will growSpring will come, kill of the whiteThe suns hum, brings back the lightCome with me, to the field ...

    1 min read
  • Currently Untitled

    CAN YOU NOT DO AGE RESTRICTIONS ANYMORE OR AM I BEING IGNORANT? FOR ANYONE WHO WANTS TO BE WARNED THIS SONG CONTAINS THE F WORD And my heart is hurting ...

    3 min read


The first draft is a trip to the amusement park. The next drafts are returning there as a safety inspector.
— SunsetTree