Published January 7, 2010
Simple words just flowing off my tongue
While we're sitting in the a - pril sun
How did it come back to this
I wonder what we have - missed
We should probably get back
I lose the tie with you like - that
wooh -oo
How do you do this to me
I can't feel my feet
So numb i can't feel anything
Make me forget everything
Temporarily
Don't take me back to reality
When i am sad you are my fun
When it is dark you are my spring - time sun
I feel like there is noothing i can say
You take my - breath away
How do you do this to me
I can't feel my feet
So numb i can't feel anything
Make me forget everything
Temporarily
Don't take me back to reality
Won't you come
run with me
See the sun
Poke through the trees
Won't you come
Dance in the dark
never let us
be apart
Won't you hold me
Until your arms go weak
Don't take me back to reality
Simple words just flowing off my tongue
While we're sitting in the a - pril sun
How do you do this to me
I can't feel my feet
So numb i can't feel anything
Make me forget everything
Temporarily
Don't take me back to reality
Please don't take me back to reality
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Hello NaRachel, and welcome to YWS. I really enjoyed reading your lyrics, they had really rhythm, and you used very nice rhyming. In the bold is the only part i didn't really like
It felt like it didn't quite fit