MrytleJinn

Hi! I normally review poetry so I decided to try something new! Thanks for suggesting your story. Alright, overall this has a lot of promise. There are some spelling and ...

Hey! So I was reading this and, yeah, it doesn't flow quite right. But that's okay. Anyways. Into the review! I wish you could see How beautiful you painted the ...

Short and sweet and so beautiful. Amazing. I'm a very delusional poet And she's a poem Which I never wrote. The speaker almost seems to be discrediting themself. Trying to ...

Wow, Junebug. Just wow. This is amazing. Why can't I just exist? Why must you break me down to build me up? The questioning is what brings this to life. ...

Short and sweet. I know that with each puff, I am brought closer to my death. I know that with each inhale, I fail my body. This sets it up ...

Alright, let's get down to business. I read this and was immediately transported into this place. The sensory details are amazing. The sound of the creek is a beautiful gift ...

I loved this, thinking of the future and who you could have. The thing that hurts the most is that if I had asked when I had a chance, she ...

FeatheryClouds, I absolutely loved this. This made me cry. And I don't cry easily. Now, the review. You wake up. Something—no, everything feels wrong. It's too early for this. You ...

You managed to take the experience of insomnia and put it into words. Something I've been trying to do for so long. The details and imagery is amazing. the blue ...

Stunning. That's what this is. Absolutely stunning. The imagery just took me away. She can feel herself becoming one with this tiny tropical ocean she has created for herself. Her ...

Hey! I read this and I immediately thought of not being fully conscious or in control of your own body. This narrator is afraid of making a mess somewhere and ...

A borrowed life. I really like that. now 'cause I know that disapproving the imperfect, was another wrong... Trust me 'cause I lived a borrowed life, pretending perfection, Pretending perfection. ...

I enjoy feminine clothing Sure, that much is true But I swear to god If I had the choice, Take away my boobs. This hit home for me. People refuse ...

Okay. Well. I don't think I can compare to those reviews I can see below. This one is short and sweet. Especially since I need to go watch my many ...

He said. He promised. Immediately hooks you and you want to keep reading. You weave explanations into the present moment and they don't stop the action. One thing. There's almost ...