Morrigan

Hi there, shoaib. This is really good. It sent shivers down my spine. Your description is good, and the way you ended it was excellent. Now, even though it's a ...

Hi there, Henry. Welcome to YWS! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. At first, i felt as if this was addressed to someone unreachable, like a ...

Hey there. I don't think we've met yet. It's nice to meet you! I really like this. It's very out there and blunt. It's nice to have the truth revealed ...

Hi there nightlyowl. I like your imagery. It's nice and clear, and paints a nice picture in my head. That being said, there are a few issues with this poem. ...

Hi there, lentil of hope. I enjoyed your whimsical tone. I, too, often write strange and wonderful things in the throes of sleep deprivation. That being said, this is not ...

Hi there, Denia. I don't think we've met yet. Well, it's nice to meet you. Now on to the review. Holy cow. This is beautiful. It's powerful and shiver-inducing. Your ...

Hello there, and welcome to YWS! It's a pleasure to see you here! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. I really enjoy that you chose to ...

Hi there, Hannah. As always, I loved reading this, and was swept away by all the vivid images you include. Lovely. Now, if I hadn't read the prompt regarding this ...

Hi there, Gee! I think that you have some very interesting ideas here. I really enjoy paradoxes like seeing things you should actually hear. Paradoxes spice up a poem and ...

Hi there, nmk, and welcome to YWS. Please take what I am going to say as suggestions. I am not overly experienced in the field of poetry, but I will ...

Hi there, Story. Whoa. I am blown away by your imagery. Just, wow. Honestly, this is going to be a rather short review because I don't see much to make ...

Hi there Spark! You have tons of really great imagery in this poem. Gosh. I read it several times before I could get down to reviewing it. You do, however, ...

Hi there. Welcome to YWS! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. This poem had a rather abrupt ending. I didn't really think it was necessary to ...

Hi there. First and foremost, this poem is beautiful. Rose-pink and powder-blue wrap themselves around the wrist of the morning. That one just about struck me dead with the beauty ...

Hi there. The word I would use to describe this poem is intimidating. It is intimidatingly beautiful, and intimidatingly long. I will do my best to be helpful, but you ...