Morrigan

Hi there! I'm here to rescue you from the Green Room! This is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. What is the reason we see dark? Because of ...

Hi there! I'm here to save you from the Green Room! I'm not an expert on song lyrics, so you'll have to bear with me. This song is quite repetitive, ...

Hi there! I'm here to rescue your work from the green room! I like the images. They're vague enough to let the reader fill in the blanks, but we get ...

Hi there, Sparkie! This is certainly an interesting poem filled with nice images. I do have a few suggestions that would make this better. you hung the moon too low ...

Hi there, I'm here to rescue your work from the green room! I really like your concept. Trying to find sense in poetry is something that I've done before, and ...

Hello, Lumi, you wonderful person, you. Okay, so I really like this. And I'm probably not going to leave a very long review because it's quite good as it is. ...

I clicked on this poem because it was on the featured list, and I was again slightly disappointed in my fellow writers on YWS. As Lumi said, this poem got ...

Hi there! This is really cute! I like how you used the rhyme scheme to make it silly, but didn't allow it to become forced. You went with the flow, ...

Hello! A belated welcome to YWS! So the beginning of the poem caught my eye, and I was like, yeah, okay, this is pretty okay, but the end gave me ...

Hello! I'm here to review. All right. I don't know if this is a screenplay or a stage play, so I'll try to give you some critiques for both mediums. ...

Hello! I understand that this is, how can I say this? In beta? I'm not sure if I'm saying the right thing, but I'll give you my opinions anyway. You ...

Hi there! I'm a big fan of your poetry because of all your images. You always manage to create lasting impressions in my mind that have me hanging on your ...

Hello! I'm here with the poetry exchange! Hey, this is beautiful. I know you've already had people telling you that, but it really is quite lovely. Lines I liked: I ...

Hello! Here with the poetry exchange! I really liked the form. Honestly, I had never heard of this form before, and had to do a bit of research on it ...

Hello there! I think Lucia said most of the nitpicky things, so I'm going to talk to you about format and stuff, in case you decide to return to script/screen ...