Morrigan

Hello, groganbabygirl, and welcome to YWS! I enjoy the imagery you use in this poem. The ending is nice, too. While I don't believe necessarily in a higher power, it ...

Hello, MemoryHunter, and welcome to YWS! I hope that you stick around for a while... or forever! For not knowing how to write poems, you've certainly got some of the ...

Hello. I appreciate your enthusiasm for this event. However, this would work a lot better and get a lot more attention if you posted this in a forum, like The ...

Hello, Pompiepoo~ This is a swirling tornado of thoughts and beautiful images. It's Everything all at once in one moment and it does illustrate the emotion nicely. However, I don't ...

Hello, Sylar! I gave this poem a like because I really understand how the speaker in the poem feels and because of the way you allow the reader to fill ...

Hello, felistia! I really enjoyed reading your poem. You take care to describe each facet of life under the sea with fresh language and vivid imagery. That being said, I ...

Hello, Trevon, and welcome to YWS. First of all, I can't say that I've been exactly in the situation of which the narrator of the poem speaks, but I understand ...

Hello, TinyJar! I really like the way you used colors in the poem. You used them in a way that could be taken literally at times, yet contributed more to ...

Hi there, Adreamer! Welcome to YWS! It's good to see new faces around. I really appreciate that you named this poem simply, after its theme. You also do a great ...

Hello, Lightsong. First of all, I just want to say that I appreciate the honesty displayed in your poem, and that you were able to convey a host of emotions ...

Hello, Chips! You've got an interesting little start to something here. I think it's wonderful that you're talking about a spiritual experience that you've had, but when talking about something ...

Hello, Lumi-senpai~ This review is basically just me rambling, so please excuse how unorganized this is. This poem is really nice. Really well thought out. I don't have many pieces ...

Hello, TheShauzer. At this point, the very subject of being cliche and wanting to be original is cliche. While I managed to get through this, the pretentiousness of the narrator's ...

Hello. You say that this poem is confusing to you, as well. That is an issue. If the poet does not know what they are saying, even a small amount, ...

Hello. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. To me, this tries too hard. You use a lot of words and metaphors that do not aid comprehension ...