Young Writers Society

Hello there! I'm here to review your work today!

Yeah, I have to agree with Morrigan on this one; this is not the most appropriate place you would want to post something like this. The purpose of the Literary Works section is to post stories, poems, and other literary compositions; something such as this, which isn't itself a literary composition, but is more an idea for an event, isn't appropriate for the Literary Works section, and is more befitting of the Forums section, which works to promote conversations between writers, among other purposes, and facilitate the development of ideas such as this. Therefore, I highly suggest that you present an idea like this in the Forums section, where you're also bound to receive more attention.

Beyond that, I like the idea. While I also agree with Morrigan that it would be more appropriate if you conformed to grammar and spelling rules - such as capitalizing your I's and using verbs in their proper forms - this was interesting to read, and I shall definitely keep it mind.

May you have a great day!

Hello.

I appreciate your enthusiasm for this event. However, this would work a lot better and get a lot more attention if you posted this in a forum, like The Lounge!

Also, if you're trying to appeal to writers, as it seems that you are, you should probably practice conventional grammar rules, such as capitalizing "I." Also, I am confused as to why you put half of this paragraph in italics. There seems to be no reason.

Have a good day!