Morrigan

Hi there, AliceAfternoon! Weirdly, I thought that I already reviewed this. I guess not! I'm here representing team Potter today! Whoo review day! Let's dive in! They are the spout ...

Hello again, Lightsong! I'm here representing Team Potter for review day! GO POTTER, GO! Anyway, let's take a look at your lovely poem here, shall we? In the first stanza, ...

Hello, klennon! I'm here representing Team Potter on review day! I really like that you took good care of your meter. That's the first thing that I noticed. I'm not ...

Hello! I'm a fan of Doctor Who as well, so I figured I'd drop by and review this poem. I think for the most part it's done really well, in ...

Hello! I found this poem very powerful and hard to read. While I can tell that you might need a bit of help with your grammar, the meaning was clear, ...

Hello! I'm here representing Team Potter on review day! Let's begin, shall we? The first thing that jumped out at me was that you bolded every "you." I don't think ...

Heyo Yams! I'm here for review day, and to keep Team Potter in the lead! GO TEAM POTTER Anyway, let's begin, shall we? I like that you use the reoccurring ...

Hello, Kaju! This was really sweet. I enjoyed all the emotion that you put into it. It feels really genuine! That being said, there are a few improvements that you ...

Hello, wolfsbane! This made me chuckle. I really like the way that you incorporate a human aspect into the raccoon. As if the narrator doesn't want to truly be a ...

Hello! This made me chuckle. I'm glad that you listed this under humor. If you had listed this under satire, I think that this would work really well. It seems ...

Hello, gammagamerale. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. What is the purpose of this poem? Is it to entertain and frighten? Are you trying to get ...

Hello! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. I think that all of life is too big of a topic to take on in one poem. Focus ...

Dang, I keep running across your poetry! XD This gave me shivers at the end. I really like how you explore the idea of sexism on a local level and ...

Hello! I like your use of onomatopoeia in this poem! It's a nice bit of repetition in here. That being said, there's still room for improvement. I don't know if ...

Hello! While this is listed under "realistic, dramatic," it made me chuckle. I think it was because even though you discuss your job, you put it into such a lilting ...