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Re: Cold-Hearted Adamant
YES! I am so glad that you wrote a song, and you labeled the parts. Like the chorus, the bridge, and all that stuff. I’ve written a lot of songs, ...
Apr 3, 2019 -
Re: Weak ( this is a mix between Lyrics, Poetry, short story)
Whoa... This is very deep. i’m sorry that you’re feeling this way. Trust me, you’re not alone. I really enjoyed the lines that said, “write stories till I’m a snoozing ...
Apr 3, 2019 -
Re: Nightmare
Hi there FireSpyGirl. I love your avatar by the way! Anyway, I’m here for a review. I really enjoyed the fact that you used your dream for an essay. I ...
Apr 3, 2019 -
Re: Alone
WHoa. THis is very deep. I saw it in the Literary Spotlight and since I like poetry so much, I decided to check it out. I’m not gonna lie, this ...
Apr 2, 2019 -
Re: The Monkey And The Bear
AWWWWW....this is literally the cutest piece of work I’ve ever seen in the website. This is so cute and I love the happy ending. Idk, I guess it’s because the ...
Mar 31, 2019 -
Re: Untitled 2
hi there Jade. Morgan here... Good JOB!!!! I’m liking the story more an more. Okay, Chapter NINE!!!! WWWWWHHHHYYYYYY?????!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? The dog dies???????????? Bruh, I was literally sin
Mar 23, 2019 -
Re: 2 poems "is like" and "lonely"
Wow!!! I really liked that you posted 2 poems at once here.. It gave the readers more than one thing to review, and a chance to really get themselves thinking. ...
Mar 15, 2019 -
Re: For The Ones We Love
You know, when I read this, it reminded me of the song “Happier” by Marshmello. The song really made me cry, and I was close to doing so when I ...
Mar 15, 2019 -
Re: Madness
Hey Morgan here for a review.. I really love this poem. I think you just need to put in some punctuation and I think that’s pretty much about it. I ...
Mar 13, 2019 -
Re: (Thanos Can) Rewrite The Stars
Hi. Morgan here. I heard the song and I actually like it. So when I saw this on here, I was so excited. I really love music and and I ...
Mar 13, 2019 -
Re: Time Stamp
OMG!!!! Love. This... Lol..sorry. i usually don’t read much poetry like this from a lot of people so I get really excited when someone does something like this. This was ...
Mar 12, 2019 -
Re: Suicide
Hey Morgan here. This was such a well written poem, and I’m pretty sure that this the first work I’ve ever reviewed for you and let me just say.....you made ...
Mar 12, 2019 -
Re: Gay Short Story
Wow! Okay!!! one this a true story? I mean, how did you get the idea to write something like this WAS SO SWEET!!!! I have never read something from the ...
Mar 12, 2019 -
Re: Broken(song, lyrics)
Hey Amna. It’s Morgan her for a review. Toats heart this! This was really sweet and I have a friend who can totally relate to this poem. So yeah. Anyway, ...
Mar 11, 2019 -
Re: Anxiety
Hi there Jade. It’s Morgan. I had just recently reviewed a poem by 1nspire, and I saw one of your reviews. You said something like poetry wasn’t something that you ...
Mar 11, 2019
