Peter:
You know I love you
So I just called you to say goodbye
I hope you'll miss me
I'm freaking out 'cause I'm gonna die
And you are so very far
You're like a billion miles away
And out of reach from me
Though you're here in my heart
Thanos can stop me if I decide
That you're my destiny
Thanos can rewrite the stars
Though you were made to be mine
Thanos can keep us apart
Though you were the one I was meant to find
It's not up to you
It's not up to me
Thanos can say what we get to be
Thanos can rewrite the stars
He took the world that was ours
Tonight
MJ (to Thanos):
You think it's easy
You think that nothing can topple you
But we are heroes
And we refuse to be cut in two
I know you're wondering "Why?"
Because you killed Peter Parker and Loki
And their fangirls
Are gonna totally kill you and you'll wake up and see that it was hopeless after all
How can you rewrite the stars?
Peter was made to be mine
Nothing can keep us apart
And he is the one I was meant to find
It's not up to you
It's up to me
No one can say what we get to be
No one can rewrite the stars
Say that the world can't be ours
Tonight
(Together)
All I want is to fly with you
All I want is to fall with you
So just give me all of you
Peter: It feels impossible
MJ: It's not impossible
Peter: Is it impossible?
Together: Say that it's possible
Thanos can't rewrite the stars
'Cause you were made to be mine
Thanos can't keep us apart
'Cause you are the one I was meant to find
It's up to you
And it's up to me
Thanos can't say what we get to be
Thanos can't rewrite the stars
Saving the world that was ours
MJ:
You know I love you
But I won't let you say goodbye
Thanos may kill you
I'll bring you back even if you die
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wow amazing... I am changed for ever.
Hello Ielu
Its amazing! I love the expression to this poem!
The topic, and emotion was great.
It was an absolutely beautiful peace of art.
There doesn't seem to be any problems with it with grammar or punctuation.
There's a good among of space between the lines.
Everything seems perfectly lined up.
I hope to read more of your work soon
Sincerely Anma
Thank you so much!
Being both a Marvel fan and a Greatest Showman fan, I applaud you. I was laughing the entire time. Especially the "Peter was made to be mine" bit. Classic. I love the way you integrated Thanos into the Rewrite the Stars song. And the last two lines "Thanos may kill you/ I'll bring you back even if you die" I think that was amazing.
Yes, I love Peter and Loki too. Hopefully everything gets fixed in the sequel coming in APRIL!!!
YEEEEEEEES!
Hi. Morgan here. I heard the song and I actually like it. So when I saw this on here, I was so excited. I really love music and and I really find it relaxing to listen to. I really love the message behind this too. Music is just poetry put into words, and so I guess that this was truly a sweet song.
I really like this!
Oh...and Zendaya....of course.
~ Morgan
And Tom Holland...of course.
Yes....They%u2019re cute together
They're dating
In real life
Ik
This was a very interesting concept. I can honestly lowkey imagine them actually singing that. I think my only qualm is that some of the lyrics didn't flow right. Other than that, it was pretty good.