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Re: Song of the lost
Alright Fallenoutofgrace, I'm here to give you the best review I possibly can. First and foremost, this line "A tear passes where I morph into the beast your all scared ...
Oct 25, 2014 -
Re: Me and My Jealousy
Your poem spoke to me on a very deep level. First and foremost, "Men cry a lot too." That single line make tears fall from my eyes, because for once ...
Oct 19, 2014 -
Re: The Light
Honestly, those first lines really hit me. And by those first lines, I mean every single line. Because that was beautiful. Your poem flows ever so smoothly, and I simply ...
Oct 19, 2014 -
Re: Wastelands: Chapter 1
I really like this chapter Emerald! My only dislikes of it, is how often Jack's name is used, it seems like his name is said every other sentence. Also, how ...
Apr 11, 2014 -
Re: Eleven Little Words
Thank you! For ruining my night! >.< Why couldn't this have been a happy ending with her saying something sweet, or simply "Yes"? UGH. All in all, I loooove this ...
Apr 6, 2014 -
Re: Wastelands: After The Flash (An introduction for an upcoming book)
In all honesty, this caught my attention. Not very much at first, but as I read the rest of it (several times might I add) It really did catch my ...
Apr 4, 2014 -
Re: Truth In A Raindrop
"What is truth? Truth is imagination." -Davidechoe13 This. This single line, it should be your famous quote. I love it. I related to every part of this, you wrote it ...
Apr 4, 2014 -
Re: Y(o)u.
I don't know why, but this just really hit me hard, maybe it's because I have an issue with racism, maybe because I have an issue with heartbreak. But nonetheless, ...
Apr 4, 2014 -
Re: The Struggle.
Rachel! Another beautiful poem! You sure have a way with words! I loved the flow, it was smooth, mind settling in a way. Your rhyming scheme was absolutely superb. You ...
Jan 27, 2014 -
Re: Army of One.
Hi Rachel, I love your poem to the fullest! There is not a single part of this poem that I could see fit to change for the better, as it ...
Dec 17, 2013 -
Re: Heartbreaker
I really like your poem Ash! There is a lot of feeling behind it, and it manages to bring up memories of mine, memories of long lost friends :p "She ...
Dec 14, 2013 -
Re: Ten's End
Reading this left me absolutely speechless, and there may or not have been a few tears. Watching he episode of Doctor Who was insane for me, there were so many ...
Dec 13, 2013 -
Re: Dear Hearts & Broken Smiles
Whoa. Despite the lack of rhyming, well the lack of noticeable rhyming I should say, I really loved your poem. "Naive little me! ...wanted to fix your laugh, but little ...
Dec 13, 2013 -
Re: December Skies
Hi CoverseFireGirl! Was this a poem, or a painting? I loved it! You did an excellent job, portraying the image, and a very vibrant image it was! Reading your poem ...
Dec 12, 2013 -
Re: when kingdoms fall
I think this poem is truly great, it's not everyday that you come across such a brilliant work of beauty. Reading and then speaking the poem aloud, gave me the ...
Dec 12, 2013
