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Hey, Knightley. It's been awhile, eh? I'll answer that....yes, it has! Anyhoo. This is very cliche, and the execution was very poor by your usually remarkable standards ;). You could ...

Hello there, Herzing. Here to review your...'poem'. Oh dear. I'm going to be harsh, so just a warning. This is not very poem-like. The stanzas are VERY awkward, composition is ...

Hey there, Sking. Nice poem you've got here. Evokes great memories of swinging. Some of them quite hilarious, so brilliant. As Kammie said, maybe another stanza would help a lot. ...

Hey there, thelastofhisclan (couldn't think of nickname for you just now)! I love Christian poems, and Christianity as a whole; this is probably because I am a Christian. It may ...

Kammie. Nice work. It feels so wierd to review the better writer (you)! Nonetheless, here I am. *stands formal* I like the subject on Haiti. It's so pitiful, watching those ...

Eddie. Harsh reviews...ahh, forever they be impossible with your work. *pats* This is honestly a fantastic, well written poem. The words...the way you write it...all aspects are wonderful, truly and ...

Hey, Cosza. Welcome to YWS. I hope you've been enjoying yourself here. Anyhoo....:) This is very good. A little cliche, but you executed it very nicely! I'd like to remind ...

This is brilliant. Fantastic, fantabulous. I loved it. I wonder where your inspiration came from for this one. :) I don't have any nitpicks, seeing how I like practically all ...

Hi, there! This is cute. Made me think of watermelon, which I oh so very miss now that it's winter. Anyhoo... I like this, for the most part. I'm just ...

Hey, there, Ben. Nice poem you've created here. I really like it. Thumbs up! Like Classy, I think you overuse 'why' just a tad. It throws the poem off a ...

Whoa. I love the happy-go-lucky feeling you've made this poem exhibit. Great job there. It's always nice to read a happy poem, in my mind. Anyways... As said above, I ...

Kammster. This ro-o-oo-ocks. The description in this little poem is superbly done, so good job on that. Also, I loved the way its written and the word choice you used. ...

Dude, Jon...amazing. Really good job. I honestly think this is beautifully written. And it rocks. So yeah. Great job. Utterly amazing. Blinded by awesomeness, I am. Really crits. Tata, Jon! ...

I loved this--honestly. Great retake. I will never forget this. It's so twisting, I had not known what to think...besides 'what's coming next'? and everything was surprising. The way you ...

Light will be my stepping stone. From inflamed grounds to glorified mountains. Translucent stairways form and crumble with each passing step. As I aspire to "greatness" walking on would-be That ...