I am not a sucker for romantic stories but i think this was really good. you got a style and it kept me hook til the end. that was a bang! based on this story alone, it think you could be good in scripts as well. you got a nice material going on here and i think, with further development, you could be really really good. writng t for lit class though, does it mean you don't write during your leisure time? hope not, you got a great talent here baby, you just have to furnish it and lo and behold world!
anyways, kudos for this nice piece... keep an eye on your other pieces as well =)
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