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A new book, hopefully
This is a co-write i'm doing with a friend of mine. I had to write the beginning, with the boy as the main person, and she's starting the next day. ...
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The Room...my novel
Okay I know I just posted yesterday but I reviewed two pieces of work before posting this so technically I'm in the clear, right? This is the beginning of my ...
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Insanity...needs much work
Many tears make the pool The pool of insanity Which holds the empty and the soulless in its grip It feeds off of my blood Which rolls drop by drop ...
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Life-a rhyming poem
Life By Misty Lynn Ellingburg Life-seems like Somewhere to be without being As though inside a portrait Watching without seeing As though locked inside myself Touching without feeling Something lacking ...
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don't laugh...no title
this is a poem I attempted to write, anyway. there is a message I want to get across but I just don't know how to do it. This burning sensation ...
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Hadchak-plz read and crit
Jesse Hadchak’s ebony hair blew violently in the wind, his eyes flashing in terror. His backpedaled and stumbled onto the muddy ground, hard. Piercing rain struck his face like a ...
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You're still here
How many petitions with underlying scars and broken hearts must you make before you realize: there isn't a point? And ...
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Intoxication- 13+
I don’t really know how to feel you, but maybe by feel I mean show you how I feel, I’ve ...
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Puzzle Pieces (13+for some language)
It’s like some sort of weird spirit takes over my body when I’m around you-I’m sure I couldn’t have said ...
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Sweet Sixteen
And I promise you I will be the exact opposite of what you expect when you see me sauntering through ...
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relationship abuse
this definately isn't going to be up to quo...I need help turning all of my thoughts into a real poem ...
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colossal
*smiles in a kind of scared way* this is one of my cheesy rhyming poems that just came to me, so...try not to be incredibly harsh. The sky is falling ...
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Eternal Life (By Annie Chantry)
my friend wrote this poem Eternal Life She-ever since six planned to perfection the bouquet of pearl daisies the crystal seamed princess dress He-learned the arts of obedience.commitment.responsibilit
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wishes don't always come true and friends will become enemie
Sometimes it’s hard just to look at you So if I smile quirkily, and I seem almost giddy it’s not the white-caramel cappuccino talking although that is what I’ll blame ...
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A horror novel (title suggestions appreciated)
Prologue: Bryant. His parents named him that because to speak his name your lips would for a full circle. He had his father’s blue eyes, his mother’s ebony hair and ...
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Feeling you-a song
For the record, this is in the pop/rock/punk genre-sort of a mix of all of them. Feeling you vs. 1 Hey, you make me crazy you give me a smile ...
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Scars
Scars Prologue: He had scars that criss-crossed up and down both of his arms, scars that had formed under cuts so deep the bearer must have hewed away at his ...
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Musings
Sometimes you have to scream jut to hear your own thoughts, lifted up in a storm of voices. Scream so that God and the whole world can hear you when ...
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first poem in a looooooong time
Sometimes, the faintest candlelight is the best protection everyone knows that monsters can’t survive in the light. if you want you can hide under the blankets with me, that’s cool ...
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Writing Challenge 9/12
A single ray of hope shines, an alabaster beam, copper chords of sunlight bathed in crimson rays of steam misty essences of sound tuned once upon a dream turns my ...
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The Room. Revised and better
Chapter One: A small, dusty police car drove up the long, winding road to St. Mary’s Reform. It looked puny and unsophisticated in comparison to the grand building in the ...
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The Room. Revised and better
Chapter One: A small, dusty police car drove up the long, winding road to St. Mary’s Reform. It looked puny and unsophisticated in comparison to the grand building in the ...
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Living Alone With Green Carpet
Okay...I'm trying to get back into the site, so I'm reading and critiquing. But I do hope that if I help you with your stuff, you will return the favor ...
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Like, ehmagawd! I'm on a roll! :P
lol. Okay, this is Luke, right? Not Jeremy? Fabulous description on the kissing. Why the hell do guys like to use so much tongue? I'm sure I don't know, a ...
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An Ode to Green Day
p.s. R-heehee What blasphemy is this- that rattles the earth's core the dogs howl, and cats meow as buildings shake and roar Who had the bright idea to make the ...
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Piecing it together, part 2
Sitting on my bed was killing me. I got up, went to the bathroom and yanked on a pair of converse before escaping out the door. As long as I’m ...
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Roping Dolls
Roping Dolls Prologue: Stacy Heath was a doll. At least, that’s what Johnny Jay called her. Wavy, Barbie-blonde hair, pinkish lips, volumptious body, she had it all. But dolls ain’t ...
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Writing Challenge 3/20
George decided to perm his hair the night before the wedding. It was getting long and shaggy, quite like it had been in his younger, surfing days. His bride-to-be would ...
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trying my hand at the short story...
Uh, this is quite short. It's the second short story I've tried to write. I wrote another that was less cliche, so I'll be posting that soon, too. Hopefully this ...
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Remy
Remy By: Misty Lynn Ellingburg (2/13/06) 1 I first met Remy at the Tinseltown movie theatre in upstate New York. I had been OTR for two weeks, long since run ...
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Jack in the Box
I didn't know if this merited a PG-13 or an R, but R seemed too harsh so... JACK IN THE BOX July 19th, 2006 1 New York City, New York ...
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I said oh! aren't ~ aren't you God? Hello. Sir.
said oh! aren't~aren't you God? Hello. Sir. 10/9 and didn't you love it, w. all the rampant Jesus slaying and goddamnit, we can re crucify Jesus ten times a week, ...
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Make Me Machinery
Exordium Two lights on a dim reflection, dull eyes gazing halfway at the mirror, a man in the shadows, a question, still, savory, that hangs in the air overhead, just ...
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[working title]
There are two POV's, the girl and the guy's, but at the moment, they are running together so I just posted the girl's. Tawny Rae This morning I woke up ...
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Working Title~About SEx Addiction-
Graham the Fucking Cracker It starts off like this: you’re eleven years old, you’re walking home from school, kind of sulking because you got detention ‘stead of recess. It’s a ...
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Glass Girl
I met a glass man in a glass house. I was sixteen. I don’t remember why I was there; I just know I was drifting off of the roof and ...
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Glass Girl, Chapter Two
*thank you to all the people who responded to the invasive messages in their inboxes... This part is essentially character development. Tell me if there's too much dialogue...the formatting in ...
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The Postman Comes Looking For Us
(A quick note: the grammar and syntax is how I meant it to be, to capture the specific character voice. Comments here should be about the story or the reading). ...
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The Postman Comes Looking For Us Pt2
JIMMY November 29th, 1989 Day One: Starts off wif us running, cause it’s called running away and that’s all that makes sense to us to be doing. Samantha’s fingers laced ...
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The Postman Comes Looking For Us,Pt3.
SAMANTHA I hold Jimmy around the shoulders and halfway drag him out from under the bridge, shaking. The man who drove us out is enormous and awe-inspiring. He’s wearing an ...
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The Postman Comes Looking For UsPt.4
THE SHOES I was manufactured in a factory on 7/7/1982, and shipped overseas. I was ugly from the get-go. I knew that because I didn’t sell, and ended up on ...
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Pretty Smiley Question Mark
Chapter One The Gift of Gab Michael Jennings has four bars of soap stacked up on his coral colored bathroom countertop. They are in white wrappings. They are Jergens brand. ...
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Pretty Smiley Question Mark
(people who read the first section--the intro--will note that I changed the name of the main character from Gabby to Manizha) CHAPTER ONE: Over the Rainbow Manizha was halfway aware ...
