This was good, but you never explain who the "you" is. A parent? A boyfriend? It would make more sense if you did. Also, I thought the ryhme detracted from the poem.
Favorite Part:
Give me some vindication
For still I keep my heart on the line
Just let me know why I stay here
Why I don't fit into your design
Least Favorite:
My body can't take the contortion
Yet the stress does these things to me
I thought I was normal or average
I found out I'm a worthless nobody
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