Published July 8, 2005
For the record, this is in the pop/rock/punk genre-sort of a mix of all of them.
Feeling you
vs. 1
Hey,
you make me crazy
you give me a smile
and then take it away,
Hey,
I wanna be your baby
it could take me a while
to get my way,
*pre-chorus*
And you love me today, but what about, what about tomorrow
Don’t take this away, can’t live without, live without your hollow heart,
~Chorus~
‘Cuz you aren’t feeling me
And I’m so feeling you
And you won’t let me be
my heart beats for two
And your smile blows me away
Come back today, come today, stay, just stay till tomorrow, wait till tomorrow
you and your hollow heart
vs. 2
Why
do you do this to me,
you’re playing with me
messing with my head
Why,
can’t you just tell me
are we gonna be,
or do you want her instead?
*pre-chorus 2*
And you loved me yesterday, but what about, what about forever
Don’t take this away, we gonna be, gonna be, gonna be together?
~Chorus 2~
‘Cuz babe you mess me up
And I just want to know
Should I hold on or break up
Should I let you go
And your smile blows me away
Come back today, come today, stay, just stay till tomorrow, wait till tomorrow
you and your hollow heart
*bridge*
You mess me up, you mix it up
boy, you keep me questioning
you shake it up, and twist me up,
oh, you keep me guessing
you keep me guessing
I still want you, but I don’t know
do you want me too, you won’t let me know
Am I all for you?
~Chorus 3~
‘Cuz you aren’t feeling me
and I’m so feeling you,
I just want us to be,
I’m the perfect girl for you,
And your smile blows me away
Come back today, come today, stay, just stay till tomorrow, wait till tomorrow
you and your hollow heart
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hmmm...yeah I guess it was cliche. didn't feel cliche when I wrote it though. it felt heartfelt...
It was really nice...cliche--but it made a good song.