MindBlown

This sort was entrancing to read.the first line hooked my into reading the rest of the story. I really enjoyed reading it :). It flowed very well from beginning to ...

Hello, I'm MindBlown and I will being writing a review for you :). Well first off I feel there should be stanzas but in not huge stickler about that. It ...

Nerdburga, thus was a great poem. It was never very choppy and flowed well. The format of this poem was great and everything was written correctly. Punctuation and capitalization were ...

Well niteowl this was a very strong poem :) it flowed well and was never choppy. You are obviously a very talented poet, and this piece was great. I didn't ...

Fortis, really creative and somewhat twisty ending :$ "A giant shadow closes in, She sings her last sorrowful note, A forest ceases its cacophonous din, In respect for the fox ...

First off I love your definition. I loved the poem too.i don't know how a bunny inspired this but ok lol. This was a great poem and I hade great ...

Hey Speakerskat! Gret poem I love it :) it flowed nicely and had great use of adjectives. I'm sure this was just a typo but each other has a space ...

Secretejournalist, This is a very intresting poem. I'm really curious as to where the inspiration for tis poem came... That is if it wasn't actually your eye..... :). Anyway, the ...

Soooooooooo sweeeeeeeeet!!!!! I loved reading it!! My favorite so far, it was very nice ;) :) . It flowed great and had a fantastic rhyme scheme. You weave a little ...

Hello Aley! This poem was very creative and enjoyable to read. I agree with Katelyn. No grammatical issues. It wasn't bumpy and flowed very well. I can tell you're a ...

Ok glovegg, very creative poem :). You need punctuation and It was written in a weird format that I didn't mind. It was full of good imagery and it was ...

Well niteowl, this poem was good. It was a bit choppy though. I didn't see a rhyme scheme, I don't know if there was supposed to be one. It was ...

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Wow great poem Speakerskat!!! I love the thought you put ino this !! The way you described him was phenomenal!! Great adjectives and it flowed really nicely it wasn't choppy ...

Great poem. I do really love short poems but this one was a little to short for my taste. Maybe it's just me ;) I still loved it. And it ...

Wow. That was an amazing hook to begin. It was really dark but cool at the same time. Sort of demented on a good way, you know kind of thriller ...