MindBlown

Wow. This poem was well very clasterphobic... But that not bad considering your topic. It flowed well and it wa very enjoyable( which is why we read right?) To read. ...

Ok so I'll be writing this as I read. There is a constant rhyme scheme of ABaB which made it wast to read and flowy. Beautiful imagery in the first ...

Hey brokensky, Thus is MindBlown here to do a review for you! Ok so this is a phenomenal poem. It flowed nicely which made it very easy to read. I ...

Ok so Theres a typo.... Th should be the, sculptures should be sculpture's. ok so this was a huge thing for me, your rhyme scheme changed in the poem! It ...

On sort but please don't use bold throughout the entire poem. I can't tell if there are stanzas but if there are they are way to long. Each stanza should ...

Ok so no stanzas.... That's ok. In the fourth line you put hart I don't quite know of it was supposed to be heart or not so.... No punctuation or ...

Fortis this is a very very deep poem. I'm serious this is great! You gave so many great things in this poem. I did notice you used torrent alot which ...

Hello, I didn't quite understand this poem... It was very strange but in a good way. Sometimes a poem that some cant grasp keeps it on there mind for hours ...

" there are moments I treasure, There are some I resent, Some of blissful pleasure, And some of sad torment." This was a beautiful first stanza. I loved it. " ...

Ok so the first rig I noticed was that there were no stanzas. Tis was a very deep piece that obviously had a deeper meaning. It was very entrancing to ...

Hi socialsuicide, This was a extremely emotional and powerful piece of work! I loved reading it and it was a great piece of work. "In that small, little house, it ...

Ok so right off the back I noticed that your capitalization and punctuation were spot on. *sigh* Ugly me. stupid me Horribly nasty me. Ok so instead of *sigh* you ...

Ok tis was a weird (in a good way) poem. Punctuation was off in most of the lines... If you really just watch the punctuation and length of the lines ...

Very strong haiku :). I enjoyed reading it, but I wish there was more to it though. The defiant grass, Eats away at dried cement, Making home again. Personal I ...

Hello :). This wa a great poem. I liked the aabb rhyme scheme. You were able to keep it very well an it flowe nicely. It was a very deep ...