Milanimo

Hi! So I really enjoy how this piece is unique and thought provoking. Great job! The only critiques I have are a bit of technical errors, like commas and the ...

Hi! First of all great poem! It's clear and concise and has a nice rhythm. I really enjoy how the poem is uniform throughout, having a repeated phrase adds to ...

Hi! I really like this poem and how it transitions smoothly from trying to repair what is lost to finally letting go. You can really capture the emotion of the ...

Hi runawaylove! I'm here to get you out of the green room. So I really like this poem. It has a message, imagery, description, metaphors, rhetorical questions, all the works, ...

First of all welcome to YWS! I hope you'll like it here! I really love this poem. It has imagery and superb diction and gives enough to let the reader ...

Hi! The sass in this is clear and strong! It's great to see a unique voice in poetry! Also I hope you feel better. The only spelling error is that ...

Hi! First off, this is a very pretty poem! It captures great emotion and has great imagery and description. I was wondering if you might want to try stanzas for ...

Very pretty! I liked how there's a perspective from both sides, as well as a common theme. I also like how the poems basically reflect each other, and it definitely ...

Hi! I really liked this poem! It's got great diction and the voice is clear and present. My only two critiques(that the other review hasn't covered) is to make sure ...

Hi! Very nice job! I would say that I agree with Monsters. You shouldn't need a picture in order to create imagery in your writing. That's what writing is all ...

Hi! Great figurative language and description! And also a late welcome to YWS! Might I suggest stanzas to break up your thoughts? Each idea changes rapidly, so you might want ...

Hi! Read the description and I'm here to help! First off, let me say that I really like this poem! It captures sadness and anxiety in great detail! I wonder, ...

Hi! Here for a review! I really enjoyed this piece. It had a lot of description and wonderful diction! Here are some of my critiques: 1. I think you should ...

Hi! Great job! It has a lot of imagery and figurative usage. I could definitely get the image of a darkness spreading to everyone and everything. I do have a ...

Very nice! It definitely has a clear beginning, climax and an end. There is not much left to the imagination, but you do wonder who the corrupt minds are, and ...