Mikko

Exactly!

I thought so too but then I decided that adding to a piece that talks about how much of a drag reality is would make it boring.

Brilliant.

I, myself, have no idea D:

adfg;gkgf thank you! :D

DUDE.

*that code fail. **"wna" is meant to be "want". Sorry for the mistake.

:') thank you so much. And yes, my main problem was with the chorus. You're awesome

Thanks! And the 'pools of blood' part worked weel then, if I managed to creep you out. I like when readers feel something when reading my work. But thatnks for ...

Sometimes I feel you're a genius. I love this and I would listen to it loads of times if it were recorded as a song.

'Bacon is bacon, Eggs are Eggs. Just to add to that, please check your grammar: why are there capitals in the middle of your sentence? I see no names of ...

Thanks (:

This is a nice piece but you've got the haiku wrong. Haikus are poems of three lines (okay, so this you've done correctly), each line containing 5 syllables, 7 syllables ...

Oh my goodness, husband, I like this. like, a lot. I like the rhyme and... how light is sounds eventhough it's quite a heavy subject. I believe this "light" effect ...

Thanks guys! I've changed the ending a little.