Mikko

These are really funny and I hope you 'twitterise' all the books! @RonWeasley ready for the chamber tonight? ;) Yep. It sounded VERY wrong LOL! Ewww I just imagined Harry ...

This is a lovely little poem. I just thought I'd touch up on some small errors. It ' s been a long time I have been treading on this path ...

I really liked this poem and I agree with the above comment: Girl Power!!! I simply love the message brought across and I think eventhough the world is changing, things ...

Awww, looks like Sea beat me to it. But I'll still write what I wanted to write. Again??? We are totally the same when it comes to doing this. But ...

This is awesome! Reminds me of Green Day- Boulevard of Broken Dreams *fangirl sceams* Okay, calm down now, Mikko. xD I like the rhythm anf flow of each different stanza ...

This really makes me want to read on. I especially liked the description of the cliffs at the beginning (reminded me of Dover beach by Matthew Arnold...) It was really ...

This is a very powerful poem indeed. Mainly because the message is straight to the point and it's length gives it that strong hold on the reader. It is a ...

Hah! I loved this! I'm so happy someone go the guts to address Winter like this. It made me laugh especially: Thirdly, I’m not sure if you are aware, but ...

I quite like this poem! I liked the message you were trying to bring acroos though I was disappointed when the third stanza did not contain that repeted first line. ...

This is really beautiful! These seem like the day-dreams you get when you're deeply crushing on someone and you can't help yourself but stare at them and imagine all the ...

This is a well written poem! Well done! I like the flow of the lines and the mysterious 'monter' you talk of. There was only one spelling error that I ...

I like what you've done here, with the background thoughts in brackets! I also like the flow of the poem and the rhyme but the first stanza has a different ...

Hey! I really like this poem because I can relate to it. I've been there before and it's true that backstabbing friends can be eye-openers. Where you wrote "guliable" did ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! I like this poem- especially the first stanza that sets a gruesome scene which is just like the life of a soldier. I like the first ...

I love this! Do you want to know a secret? You seriously removed my stress with this poem! The rhythm and rhyme are just so unwinding and kept constant. Nice ...