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Re: Miracle Worker
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. Oh goodie, another one?!?! *Is delighted* Onto the review. A miracle working God I think you could put a dash to connect ...
Oct 26, 2013 -
Re: "Abandoned" Part 2
The Messenger Knight here to review for you! So, finally got to this. I see you got some good reviews though, so happy about that. Now, onto my own. so ...
Oct 26, 2013 -
Re: Free At Last
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. So, I have been faithfully following your posts and loved this one just like all of your others. This is almost written ...
Oct 26, 2013 -
Re: Under the Influence
The Messenger Knight here to review for you and the KotGR. So first off, glad to see this up after hearing about it and trying to help you decided your ...
Oct 26, 2013 -
Re: Days of Gold Gone By: Ep.Four
The Messenger Knight here to review. So, the beginning was awesome, and although obviously you were trying to make it metaphoric, that can be done wrong. You executed it perfectly. ...
Oct 25, 2013 -
Re: A Lost Cause - Ch 2
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. So, this was a great second chapter, and emjayc covered most of the things I was going to point out, but let ...
Oct 24, 2013 -
Re: Prank Wars
The Messenger Knight here to review . . . . . Uh . . . What do I say? I don't get this at all. Script or not you have ...
Oct 22, 2013 -
Re: I Remember Peru
Wait, you got to go to Peru? *Huffs* Oh Hi, I'm here to review for you :) You don't have any punctuation when there is talking, but besides that your ...
Oct 21, 2013 -
Re: A Lost Cause - Ch 1
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. SO, the first two paragraphs felt too fast for me, but after that I was into it all the way. I really ...
Oct 20, 2013 -
Re: sometimes
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. So the biggest bug in this is the fact that you have no punctuation. Not only does it not look as good, ...
Oct 18, 2013 -
Re: Her
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. So, no punctuation? :( No, no no . . .!!!! Can't take it. OK, so *Recomposes* This is actually a quite nice ...
Oct 18, 2013 -
Re: "Abandoned" Part 1
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. So this review is basically technical stuff since this poem for me didn't say a whole lot. I think a part 2 ...
Oct 18, 2013 -
Re: My Lord, My Savior
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. I shall not lay thee head, down on the devils pillow, but knell at the feet, of my lord, for he is ...
Oct 18, 2013 -
Re: Crucifix
The MEssenger Knight here to review for KotGR. First off I'm a Christian, so I was happy to see this. Marry kneels at my feet. She cries and begs the ...
Oct 18, 2013 -
Re: From Us Teens
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. And guess what: this is going to be my 300th review. Aren't you lucky? Probably not.:) *Organizes himself for review.* I really ...
Oct 17, 2013