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Hey there! Happy Review Day :) let's get spookin' I've been meaning to write a short story for Halloween and have failed to do so, but it seems that you ...

Hey there! Happy Review Day! Your blurb and title caught my eye. So I thought I'd get a ticket and catch a flick while I was in town. I'm not ...

Hey there! Welcome, welcome, welcome and Happy Review Day! Let's hop right in, ya?! On the macro, welcome to ever writing anything xD This entire thing is me when I ...

Ugh I am so in love with your style already. I'm not even a naturally poetic person, and don't always review poetry on here because I don't feel like I'm ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS and Happy Review Day! I don't know if this was intentional, or just YWS messing with your spacing, but I think that having 0 stanzas, ...

Hey there! Happy Review Day and welcome to YWS :) Let's hop in, shall we? In the first line I believe a comma is in order after "I walk". In ...

Hey there, and happy review day! Right off the bat, I love the drywall analogy. It's also interesting that whereas you would expect the person being touched to be the ...

Hey there! The title and description intrigued me, and I was not disappointed. As an overall, I really love this piece. I love the WWI setting, I've always found it ...

I'm back with one more for ya! Let's hop in. The rest of the school day passed drearily This is another good example of -ly words. Dreary usually carries the ...

Bonjour la verde It was Monday and the three of them were at the school library, supposedly planning their quest. LOL every group project ever in high school "But what ...

I'm back. Is that menacing or exciting? I don't know. you tell me. o.o Val's eyes sparkled, her previous misfortunes forgotten, and she just managed to stifle a delighted scream. ...

Hi there! Go team green forever ammirite There's not much to say on specifics as this was a short and pretty clean prologue where grammar and the technical aspects are ...

*Ignoring all grammarly tips on poetry is almost comical* hi friend. Let's hop in shall we? The title intrigued me and the poem did not disappoint. there is a strange ...

hi there. First off, welcome to YWS! This poem conjured up a lot of things for me all at once. for one, it reminded me of how Galadriel meets Sauron ...

Hey there, and welcome to YWS :) As an overarching comment before I get into specifics, I wanted to say that, much like I used to, you seem to struggle ...