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Hey there and welcome to YWS :) It has been here as long as I have. At first we did notice its presence. I believe you meant to say that ...

Hi there, here for a little review :) I love the imagery of this poem. The cosmos is such a fun environment to frame any story in, and can be ...

Hi there! You asked me a while back for a review and I'm here at least. I really do apologize about the delay, but I think there's a lot to ...

I was about to be done for the evening, but then I saw the title of this poem, and I thought "There's no way I don't at least do myself ...

Hey, I liked your first poem so I thought I would stop by for more :) So, I really like this poem as well. There's this whole untold story that ...

Hey there! here to wind down Review Day and try to bring my team a win while also reading some great poetry! So, here are a few notes for you: ...

Back one more time today and I can say before I even read it that removing the bold lettering already looks better and is easier on the eyes to read. ...

Back for more as promised. 1. While it was difficult to read the large chunk in the prologue, this is sooo much more. A few tips for breaking your work ...

Hey there :) welcome to YWS and Happy Review Day! Let's hop in 1. I would personally put a trigger warning for this, especially with hos the last sentence goes, ...

Hey there and Happy Review Day as we wind down the stretch! Let's get to it 1. I love the overall feeling of raising poem. I always think that poem ...

Hey there! I won't be reviewing all of these in one review, but I want you to get some outside opinions, so let me know once this is out of ...

Hey there! Happy Review Day from the pumpkin teeeam. Let's hop right in. I'm not going in any specific order but just jotting down some thoughts. 1. I always love ...

It seems everyone is getting in on the spooky fun eh? Let's go through this and I'll make a few points for you to consider! 1. Overall, good vibes. I ...

Alright. Let's do this ooone laaast tiiime 1. Valid thoughts by Minerva in the beginning. You haven't stated it but it seems that her upbringing was not only rough, but ...

I'm still a'comin! Let's get right to it. 1. My overall thought is that this feels like half a chapter, or that the last chapter and this one should be ...