Marshymallow

Woah! Let me just say that description was amazing! I couldn't stop reading as you described the gruesome details - causing me to horrifyingly picture each event. When one reads ...

Whilst this did tickle my heart with the story laced through it, I feel like the rhythm and the rhyme are a little forced. Poems do not have to rhyme ...

This poem has very interesting descriptions to enjoy you show how pretty nature can be and engage the reader on a heart warming journey of your tales. When you start ...

This has a very cute rhyming scheme which reminds me a little of two lyrics stitched together. I really liked the format and how all the lines fit perfectly - ...

A very beautiful poem that, with a little polishing, has a lot of potential. A small suggestion - the line can be a full sentence as separating them to a ...

An interesting attempt at a sonnet - I like the vocabulary that is in use and the fast paced story behind it. However this lacks in iambic pentameter - for ...

This poem had a very all over the place feel to it. I like the idea that you are grasping at and how you can read this poem in two ...

This poem beautifully tells a tale of a broken heart. We humans are built on a mountain of trust and you talk of how these mountains crumble. I myself can ...

This was a very effective short. That made me want to read on. The idea of reancarnation is used well here as well as the knowledge that you have recieved. ...

This was a really cute poem. (A lot better than my first attempt) I love how you start off with into the deep we go since the reader can picture ...

You create a strong message here as you unfold the fact that there is too many expectations in today's society. You also use sophisticated wording and punctuation which makes the ...

I haven't been in a review day before, but I can't believe you got such awful reviews. I really like how you explain your misfortune whilst keeping the structure consistent ...

This was really fun to read! The rhythm created was consistent and the rhyming mostly worked really well. The words flow easily as I flick through the lines. The title ...

A butterfly with a cracked wing is never truly free - they are trapped in a cage of walking as their delicate freedom is destroyed. I really like how you ...

This was so emotional. *tries to hold back tears* The story you tell is really impactful on the reader as they read in shock and pity, biting their nails for ...