Markontheworld

Quite interesting, I must admit. I'm glad I read this after you can out with chapters 2 and 3. This way I can just go strait (not sure if that's ...

Okay I must say over all this was a good story, however, I felt like it was missing something. First of all while you did give us a basic gist ...

Holy flubernuggets with cherries on top!!! That was freaking beautiful!!! You could say this is what love is all about. Loving someone for all they are, it's obvious the you ...

Hey violet! Man this was a really awesome poem. The fear of unfavorable change, right? "If something is left unfinished than maybe I can put the out come in my ...

I realize I may be way off base considering this is very controversial so please bare with me. The way I see it, especially when it comes to your last ...

Wow!! This is really good sauna!!! I've always been a fan of stories with missions. I understand the reasoning behind the governments desicion to get rid power/ electricity, but I ...

Sisterly feud, huh? I may not know why you two are fighting, but calling your sister a daughter of the devil isn't too nice. That's like saying she is pure ...

Hey RMS!!!! Just a few questions here, one of them being are you really 10? Because I know maybe one other ten year old who can write this well. Granted ...

Love or the truth, huh? A very gray concept, and one you played very well might I add. One is connected to your heart, and the other to your brain. ...

It is brilliant!!! Why? Because it was you who wrote it. In other words what you were trying to say the structure in a poem should mean very little compared ...

Quite beautiful, might I say. Either a lost love, a forbidden love, or a love that has yet to be found. All very sad things partnered with the beautiful emotion ...

Awwwwwww jeez, such a heartbreaking story. People can be so cruel, no forget cruel this isn't even humane. Who in there right minds could stomach killing a dog never mind ...

Hey Donnie boy!!!! Really liked your poem!!!! I get it, eyes are the window to the soul, right? In other words if you look deep enough you can read someone's ...

I may be wrong, but the way I see it you see yourself as a puzzle. One even you have yet to solve. You feel like your weird because you ...

Aynonoumous!!!! Probably spelled that wrong, but anyways I like your poem. The message behind it is what I like about it, the world is a beautiful place. However, the one ...