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Mahvash

  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I feel alone

    Hey!! It's Mahvash here and I hope you are doing fine. So let's get to the topic. This poem is very beautifully written. This is a very emotional piece of ...

    May 25, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: The Miserable

    Hey!! It's Mahvash here. Hope you are doing well. This is an amazing piece of writing. Seriously, I liked it a lot. The punctuation is good, the flow is awesome. ...

    May 25, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Fire in my Eyes

    Hey It's Mahvash here. Hope you are doing fine. So let's get to this poem. As a matter of fact I really liked it. It truly reflects your feelings. The ...

    May 22, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Of summer ..

    Hey it's Mahvash here! Hope you are doing fine. I really liked this poem. And the use of imagery was amazing, seriously. I felt as if I was just witnessing ...

    May 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: If I Could Fly

    Hey!! It's Mahvash here. And hope you are doing fine. This poem really caught my mind and it is somehow related to my thoughts. This is amazing plus it shows ...

    May 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Love Letters

    Hey! it's Mahvash here. and hope you are doing fine. So let's talk about this poem. This is just amazing. When I was reading it I felt as if my ...

    May 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: The World is Black, People with different Shades

    Hey it's Mahvash here. Hope you are doing fine. This piece of writing is amazing and yes it speaks out about many issues that are on top of list but ...

    May 7, 2016
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Other Re: Untitled

    Hey it's Mahvash here. Hope you are doing fine. This piece of writing is such an amazing one. This poem has now become my favorite because I am facing the ...

    Apr 23, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: She Gives A Smile

    Hey!! It's Mahvash here and hope you are doing. It's a really nice reflects your feelings very well and the flow of emotions is good. The words are nicely penned. ...

    Apr 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: A sad, sad smile

    Hay!! It's Mahvash here..It's a really good poem and i some few words you have defined your feelings. It's an emotional one. You have done a really great job. keep ...

    Apr 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: by bicycle

    It's a good poem. The message is very clear and strong. You have very efficiently criticize the bad things (maybe it's a "Satire"). It's true that everyday we see millions ...

    Apr 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: I believe

    It's a good poem. It seems that you really have put efforts and all the emotions in this poem. You have done a really good job. This poem reflects about ...

    Apr 19, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: Forever? are you sure?

    Hey it's Mahvash here for a review. That's a really interesting piece of writing. I liked it a lot as well as I enjoyed it a lot. It has got ...

    Apr 17, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Show Me

    Amazing poem..!! A very heart catching poem. The punctuation is really good and capitalization is also good. The way you have expressed your emotions and the way you have demanded ...

    Apr 15, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Her.

    Whoa!! What an emotional poem have you written! It's mind blowing! You seriously have got a a talent of writing. The flow is excellent. And the way you used one ...

    Apr 15, 2016


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