MadameLuxestrange

Hi there! Sorry it's taken me so long to get back to you...I've been taking and studying for AP tests :P Now, for my review: First for the goods. I ...

Hi there! Contrary to what some of the previous reviewers have said, I don't think this was entirely confusing. I don't quite understand all of it, but I think I ...

Since you were kind enough to review my poem, I thought I'd return the favor! You have a very vivid writing style, enabling the reader to picture everything easily. I ...

Hi there! I personally loved reading this :) When I was eleven, my mother passed away from cancer, so this really struck a chord with me. It's a beautiful representation ...

Hi there! Alrighty, I've got just a few comments. The first thing is that my predecessor on the review board has hit a lot of really good points. There are ...

Hi there! Okay, so most of the technical errors I noticed were already hit on by the person who reviewed before me, so I'm not going to go through those ...

Hi there! I really like the idea you have here! There's a lot of great sensory imagery in here and I liked the use of ellipses towards the end. I ...

Hi there! This, despite being so very short, is excellent! I feel like you could easily expand this. It's very beautiful :) Other than adding to it, and what my ...

Hi there! This is very sweet and cute :) However, there are some structural things that could use some work. Poets can absolutely do all their letters in lower case ...

Hi there! As the reviewer before me has already said, this is a good idea, but there's not much else here. I'm not trying to sound mean, but that's just ...

Hello, I'm Luxe and I'm going to review this for you! First, this was a great start to your story. I loved how your writing style reflected the thoughts of ...

I must say, this was very original! It was an enjoyable read: you have a good writing voice that you utilize to your advantage and you clearly have a good ...

I really enjoyed reading this poem! Now, I'm not much of a poet, but I'll give this a shot at reviewing it. I agree with what BlueAfrica had to say ...

Okay, so this was a fairly good start to a story. Your story seems a little too X-Menish and could be a little more original, but it's still a good ...

Hi there! I'm Luxe and I'm going to give you a review today :) First off, I like the premise of your story. It's a good idea and it starts ...